Storyline advice?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ict-GlP4Qhw
I just find music for invis suit....and now he has halo suit....and its finished? I wanted to give some storyline advices :D cool story rovar:)

Thanks! I doubt it will be animated anytime soon. :p

cool nnow I am on page 86 best of MADNESS SERIES :D I wanna see this animated :D

its all right 24 floors

sry my bad I was blind :D

HI I am reading all that happy and funny stuff ....but I think I found a mistake on page 50.....there were 50 floors.....they were on the roof.....after they go down the hallway they found elevator.....they were on roof>>>>that means that they are 50th floor not 23....kinda strange :)