I decided to make this comic. It's about a man, whos world is turned upside down froma sudden combine invasion. While fighting back he realizes of his own mind power that he can use to fight back!

Part 1



Part 2





More coming soon!

D: What's in the garage?

Nice story so far, keep it up and everything'll improve in the long run ;)

Oh hes closing the garage door, his truck is in it

Quite an unusual car for a guy with an office job I must say.

Posing was a little awkward in panel 6 on page one.

But on the whole it's pretty good. :)

That was really really good! Keep it up dawg

It's a very nice comic, and i'm glad that you took inspiration from the way that the story was told in my comic.

I liked the comic, and i have a few tips & tricks for you!

• Get some better fonts, you can download some nice fonts from http://www.dafont.com, be sure to download "SF Slapstick Comic" (both the regular and the shaded one) and "Talkies" (very nice speech bubbles and so on! Your comic needs better speech bubbles :)
• Increase the image quality when you take screenshots ingame, type: jpgeg_quality 100 (in the console) to increase the quality :)
• Don't save them as gifs, save them as png or jpg! :)
• Ask someone to check your comic before you post it, i found a few spelling mistakes and so on, which makes your comic seem less serious than it actually is :)
  
  Aquired should be Acquired
• The posing is a bit off in some places, (nobody is perfect, i make bad poses too sometimes), but just check it out a few times before you post it

I hope that helped!

Good job, can't wait for the next part! :D

Rated good!

Yea... im bad at posing running people XD
And yes i need to save it as a jpeg

If you need help, just ask me, I'm always available in case you require my assistance :)

Sorry the third and fourth part are taking awhile

Kolton,youre the guy in the flood server that spammed with me?
I'm ROFLCOPTER.

Oh and,wrong section i presume.
aside by that,use GIMP or Photoshop,not MS Paint.

I actually used fireworks, just saved it as a .gif by accident

Working on Part 3 now

You are probably one of the nicest people I have ever seen on facepunch.

Tis' a shame you got banned.

good comic. The editing was good. Like the bubbles and the commentary or whatever those boxes are called. The posing was pretty good. The boss saying your fired and his hands on the stearing wheel are kinda of awkward. well as for the car, his hand is sorta clipping but I think that was the best pose. I think its quite hard to pose in a vehicle.

Also why was ankpuss banned for post made 3 months ago?

Yea! He is! :D Ok I'm now editing part 3. It's Intense!

Here it is, Part 3!

If some words are hard to see go here...
http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/958...unpart3xq1.jpg




Oh and by the way, I'm not aiming for it to look nice and amazing. I just want the pictures and the story. Don't tell me to make the borders look better

WOW I CAN RELATE CAUSE IM A DouCHEBAG TOO!

Huh? What does that have to do with anything?

It was a post I made 3 days ago, and I was banned because it was an unnecessary post, I only wrote like three words :P

I am unbanned now :) So my niceness factor will once again rule the world!

Jokes aside, I remember how I was in the beginning, and how much help I actually got, and I just want everyone else to be able to have the same opportunities.

Warning: Being overly kind may sometimes make your head explode

Constructive Criticism for Janooba:

Maybe you don't want to make the comic nice and pretty, but I'm telling you that it will be taken much more seriously if you do make it pretty :)

interesting comic i am awaiting part 4

This comic is gonna be awesome, just need an epic layout, this layout you'r eusing I recommend it to funny comics, by the way, You told us about the story, I mean, it would be better if the story would be telled as the comic progress, but you already told it at the begienning! anyway, This is gonna rock!

well i didn't really spoil anything. I just said it like you would read off the back of a book! Thanks for all your positive feedback!

More. Now!

Maggot, we want some MOAR! (lol)

EDIT:

Unless It's a farm!