1. Post #41
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    The shoulders are too high up; he has no neck.
    The biceps and triceps need better definition.
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  2. Post #42
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    The biceps and triceps need better definition.
    I dunno looks like it's supposed to be a properly skinny guy. Reminds me of my own bicep-tricep definition
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  3. Post #43
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    I dunno looks like it's supposed to be a properly skinny guy. Reminds me of my own bicep-tricep definition
    This. I don't have anymore definition than that.

  4. Post #44
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    alright time to move on

    Damn that looks really nice.
    What technique do you use? I paint in real life, but not in photoshop.

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    Damn that looks really nice.
    What technique do you use? I paint in real life, but not in photoshop.
    Well for that particular piece I painted everything on one layer with only grayscale gradients, then I had a couple of layers on overlay mode and colored it.

  6. Post #46
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    AW COME ON, porn movie. What the hell is wrong wth you? It's a shirtless guy.

    maybe putting up my practice art on Facepunch was a bad idea. I get nothing out of this.
    Please don't stop :frown: it's great seeing the updates.

    If nothing else you might have more of an incentive to paint?
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  7. Post #47
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    there's a huge fat highlight spot on the belly ruining the whole shape.
    Also trapecius seem to be horribly overdone and shoulders are in a wrong position for that kind of pose, they should be more pushed back or somthing. He looks kinda like a krogan.
    Sorry for that porn joke, I was tired.
    still hard to think of a situation why character should have that kind of clothing in that kind of situation, or even being able to stand in a pose that extencively use the muscles that have a new, bleeding bullet hole in them.

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    also dont' stop updatan stuff, your shit is nice. I do love the technique and seeing you progress fast.

  8. Post #48
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    I love this stuff. Please don't stop posting. :(

  9. Post #49
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    there's a huge fat highlight spot on the belly ruining the whole shape.
    Also trapecius seem to be horribly overdone and shoulders are in a wrong position for that kind of pose, they should be more pushed back or somthing. He looks kinda like a krogan.
    Sorry for that porn joke, I was tired.
    still hard to think of a situation why character should have that kind of clothing in that kind of situation, or even being able to stand in a pose that extencively use the muscles that have a new, bleeding bullet hole in them.

    Edited:

    also dont' stop updatan stuff, your shit is nice. I do love the technique and seeing you progress fast.
    Thank you. And yeah I am here to learn.
    Also about the design, I'm just letting my imagination flow and it isn't always hyper realistic.

  10. Post #50
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    Just to make you think about what you do instead of throwing in random details that contribute in no way other than visually.

    It'd just be more beliveable if you'd have to cope with the hole, and it'd be more intresting.

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    Just to make you think about what you do instead of throwing in random details that contribute in no way other than visually.

    It'd just be more beliveable if you'd have to cope with the hole, and it'd be more intresting.
    Indeed it will. Keeping that in mind

  12. Post #52
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    Forgot to meniton but I'm impressed by the snake (kurt russel) portrait.
    You managed to catch the personality quite well, which is more than we can say about most portraits here.

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    And I'm not sucking up I just forgot to meniton that.

    Edited:

    Okay, maybe a little bit sucking up.
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  13. Post #53
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    Well for that particular piece I painted everything on one layer with only grayscale gradients, then I had a couple of layers on overlay mode and colored it.
    Well to be honest I love your style. It reminds me of my own when I used to draw for like 5 hours a day back in high school. Your comic is also very professional.

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    Stuff I did yesterday and today, hands and torso study mostly from real life







    and a quick photostudy using only hard values.



    More tomorrow? Maybe.

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    bad scanner btw getting new one
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  15. Post #55
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    Nice work! Can't see anything wrong with the anatomy.

  16. Post #56
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    Nice picture of the Mohawk ordeal in Quebec.
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    stuff I did today... fagstudy

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  18. Post #58
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    sweet. I really love the photo. You really nailed this with some seriously emotive brushwork. Perhaps the background should be less contrasted though? The characters blur into it a little.

    I'm not sure the feeling of the image would have been captured better in some really intense colours too.

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    torso study mostly from real life
    Some hench body. I am impressed by who's ever it is.

  19. Post #59
    The Union Jack would look a shit ton better with a Hammer and Sickle in the middle of it
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    your digital painting is making me jealous to the point that i want to get all pissed at you for being so good; dont stop!
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    Some hench body. I am impressed by who's ever it is.
    It was a statue.
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  21. Post #61
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    It was a statue.
    hahah that makes sense

  22. Post #62
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    What's with all the gaybows.

    Anyways some stuff I did today

    refless sketches


    Self portrait lol horrible


    Hands


    Photostudy


    Batstudy
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  23. Post #63
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    Nice.

    I gotta get my work ethic sorted out and start working like this. I need to pump out a lot more work.

  24. Post #64
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    Your faces are really long
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  25. Post #65
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    Yeah, the chins especially. Always very long. Just bring them up a bit, make the jawline flatter.

  26. Post #66
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    which ones? I can't see it myself

  27. Post #67
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    Pretty much every face you've ever drawn that wasn't from direct reference.
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  28. Post #68
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    which ones? I can't see it myself
    Line is where chin should have ended
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  29. Post #69
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    nng, I hate how I draw, I can't see the mistakes myself. And I try to maintain a webcomic and learn realism and it just get mixed you know? But I'm trying, I'm trying so fucking hard because I want this so much.

    Alright emotional speach end.
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  30. Post #70
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    nng, I hate how I draw, I can't see the mistakes myself. And I try to maintain a webcomic and learn realism and it just get mixed you know? But I'm trying, I'm trying so fucking hard because I want this so much.
    Good for you, i actually like the way you draw them, gives them some style that makes them your own.
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  31. Post #71
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    Good for you, i actually like the way you draw them, gives them some style that makes them your own.
    Unless he is trying to make the people look real or different from one another.

  32. Post #72
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    Can't wait to see what you post next. You are fucking spectacular. There's not much I wouldn't do for skills like that.

  33. Post #73
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    What brushes are you using for those really square-looking studies? I like the style.

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    What brushes are you using for those really square-looking studies? I like the style.
    Not anything fancy, a rough brush that came with photoshop. One of those texture brushes I think.

    Also thank you Jordan0795
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  35. Post #75
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    stuff I did today... fagstudy

    Your fagstudy here... Is this of that stupid kid with the retarded name from transformers...? Or just general fags and he's a perfect match to be the most prominent fag ever?
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    Your fagstudy here... Is this of that stupid kid with the retarded name from transformers...? Or just general fags and he's a perfect match to be the most prominent fag ever?
    What? Didn't quite understand that but It's just a random fag I found. Dunno his name.

  37. Post #77
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    His name is Shia LaBeouf according to wiki... He's from the movie transformers. You picture looks a lot like him.

    Wiki: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Shia_LaBeouf
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    His name is Shia LaBeouf according to wiki... He's from the movie transformers. You picture looks a lot like him.

    Wiki: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Shia_LaBeouf
    No it wasn't him i drew

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    Hate that fucking guy, ruining transformers
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    Haven't got much done these past days But yeah some failed attempts here

    gave up on this one



    Gave up on another one



    And delicous bruises

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  40. Post #80
    Mouth is way too low. The space between the lips and nose should be about 1/3 of the length between the lips and bottom of the chin.
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