Best thing I've heard from you. Honestly, that sounds REALLY good.
I'll add some constructive criticisms: Playing-wise, 0:32 sounds a bit sloppy, as does the transition at 0:38. The heavy riff after isn't as tight as it could be. Mix-wise, it sounds a little flat, like it needs to be more stereo. And it's probably my new headphones that I'm not entirely used to, but it sounds a little bass-heavy and thick for my tastes. Though that's really a personal thing. Aside from that, it sounds great.
Thanks a bunch!
The bass is dominating at some parts of the song and I will lower it more when the song is done entirely. The transition sounds a bit off because the heavy riff before the clean part stops so suddenly and it same goes for the part that starts after the cleant part. Some background noise would make it blend in a bit better I bet, so that's what I'll try next.
As for the mixing, it's not ready yet, because I wanted to try out how the song would sound when mixed and smacked together.
Thanks for the criticism anyways, I'll see what I can do about the stuff you pointed out in the final mix.