As it is, I've done a ton of research as to what people liked and didn't like about the first movie. A main focal point is character development, and another is the too-basic plot. I'm striving to fix those issues with my new script.
Yes, I have a camera and equipment. Yes, I completed the script. I have plenty of time to revise it so...
Constructive criticism of the first movie would be largely appreciated here. Help me make a better movie!
Tell me what you liked and didn't like about the movie; Please be specific!
And yes, it 's an indie film.