1. Post #1
    lonefirewarrior's Avatar
    July 2010
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    I've had this one for a while and I looked at it a bunch of times since I made it like a month or two ago. I just now noticed the horrific hand clipping on the left.

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  2. Post #2
    The King Of Zing
    minilandstan's Avatar
    September 2009
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    Why is his clothing different from the other soldiers?

    And why are they wearing gasmasks, what's so toxic about the air
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  3. Post #3
    Dumpster Duke
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    July 2009
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    This is really well done.
    Artistic for you.
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  4. Post #4
    lonefirewarrior's Avatar
    July 2010
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    Why is his clothing different from the other soldiers?

    And why are they wearing gasmasks, what's so toxic about the air
    1: I was too lazy to pose FPS arms so I took a DoD v_model. He's also not being hit by that sickly green lamp so he looks even bluer. Dabadeedabadye.

    2: I just thought they looked coo'.

  5. Post #5
    The King Of Zing
    minilandstan's Avatar
    September 2009
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    Anywho, it looks nice. But the cliff in the background is flat, so i'd maybe choose a better map in the future.
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  6. Post #6
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    February 2011
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    oh shit this is a really good picture
    the guy on the far right looks badass!
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  7. Post #7
    The King of Wing
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    Dat... Lighting.
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  8. Post #8
    I pleasure myself while wearing Combine armour~~
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    May 2010
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    This gave me a boner somewhat. Maybe I just like it a LOT!
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  9. Post #9
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    May 2011
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    Nice work, although i think they guy on the far-right is a bit too calm since people are actually shooting in that direction.
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  10. Post #10
    lonefirewarrior's Avatar
    July 2010
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    I was thinking of General Shepard in the beginning battle in MW2.
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  11. Post #11
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    June 2009
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    excellenté
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  12. Post #12
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    December 2007
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    Overall nice. But that sharpen is really really nasty in some places.
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    Dennab
    December 2010
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    "I'm waiting for my health to magically regenerate, sir."
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  14. Post #14
    lonefirewarrior's Avatar
    July 2010
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    Overall nice. But that sharpen is really really nasty in some places.
    On the trees and around some of the buildings, right?
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  15. Post #15
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    Dennab
    February 2011
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    I really like the foreground, but the background is lackluster. it's flat and uninteresting
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  16. Post #16
    #420 PRAISE IT
    pvt.jenkins's Avatar
    May 2010
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    I dunno, something about the yellow-y-ness of it I don't like.. but s'cool.
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  17. Post #17
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    August 2008
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    great posing and composition. decided to have a crack at editing it:



    Edited:

    snow is a bit shitty
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  18. Post #18
    lonefirewarrior's Avatar
    July 2010
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    Iz coo'.

  19. Post #19
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    September 2009
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    right one is too relaxed
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  20. Post #20
    lonefirewarrior's Avatar
    July 2010
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    That was the idea. Like General Shepard from MW2 and Kilgore from Apocalypse Now.

  21. Post #21
    Loen's Avatar
    December 2009
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    Very nice visual composition, would of really benefitted from some motion blur on the troops though, and make it look more hectic and intense. Also the opposition look pretty static; why aren't they returning fire? At least have some puffs of smoke and debris flying from gunshots.

    The sharpness on that tree and the perfectly straight cliff are a real eye sore, but not really in-your-face distracting at least.

    Why is his clothing different from the other soldiers?

    And why are they wearing gasmasks, what's so toxic about the air
    You're judging the clothing of a blurred and out of focus, first person view of someone's arms?

    And what does it even matter that they're wearing gas masks? It's a pretty insignificant detail to be pointing out. Gas masks give a very dehumanized, bad-ass, intimidating, and war ready look (same with balaclavas), which is appropriate for the situation stylistically regardless of whether the air is toxic or not. It also reminisces back to the barbaric, high casualty, chemical laden war zones of the first world war.
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