With hard work, I went from this shit, to something that's actually pleasant to look at.
Art is NEVER going to turn out well on the first, or even the 10th try. Every good artist I know is constantly trying to improve from where they're currently at.
I know it's cliche as fuck: but art is a skill, and like any other skill it can be honed with plenty of effort.
Your pageking will draw some dergs and post them later.