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 Post #1
 8th June 2009 Last edited by k00lwhip; 9th June 2009 at 08:45PM..
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Hey fellow facepunchers, recently I've been lurking in the creationism corner and have been realizing that some of us really need help on what we're saying. I'm not saying we're all wrong, but some of our comments here aren't very helpful and sometimes they hurt. So i'm hoping you guys use this guide to help influence your future comments on people's creations. All the art and writings you see here were formulated by yours truly







Please know though that active constructive criticism doesn't only include the critic, it includes the creator as well. It's partly the creator's job to be able to accept criticism and use it to help himself develop better skills.





That's it for now, if i think of more lesson's i'll update. or at least try to. I hope this helps : D
so go on and criticize like no other now that you can. also tell me of spelling errors cause i only looked over it once. Hopefully we'll start seeing more helping than things like "wow gtfo newb" or things along those lines.

everything (art and writing) was done from scratch and by me, K00lwhip (jcplf)
 Post #2
 8th June 2009
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Wow, that's nice. Well put together and stuff. I like the colors too. Hopefully people will follow these, but I doubt the DICKS OF FACEPUNCH will...Once again, good job.
 Post #3
 8th June 2009
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Sticky, now!
 Post #4
 8th June 2009
Dennab
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hey heres some criticism your guide sucks! haha jk.
 Post #5
 8th June 2009
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ha thanks dudes. This does look worthy of being stuck don't it.

the truth is i just started off the top of my head, no planning whatsoever. so ha.
 Post #6
 8th June 2009
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Excellent guide. I noticed a spelling error on Lesson 2. You spelled destructive as "descructive".
 Post #7
 8th June 2009
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Excellent guide. I noticed a spelling error on Lesson 2. You spelled destructive as "descructive".
thank you. did not notice that. i shall fix that sometime.
 Post #8
 8th June 2009
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Stickyed
 Post #9
 8th June 2009
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Dude.

I didn't admit it but getting this stikyed was one of my dreams.
 Post #10
 8th June 2009
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I just hope people will read this.
 Post #11
 8th June 2009
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Congrats on the sticky.
 Post #12
 9th June 2009
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I just hope people will read this.
so do I.
 Post #13
 9th June 2009
Dennab
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this tutorial made me 159 all over myself
 Post #14
 9th June 2009
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this tutorial made me 159 all over myself

i hope so it took me like 3 hours.
 Post #15
 9th June 2009 Last edited by Xerios3; 9th June 2009 at 08:53AM..
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Haha amazing

At first I expected just another boring constructive critism guide ( cause that doesn't interest me =P ), but that "for the creator" part surprised me
I have to say that it was nicely written, nice use of frames,colors and illustrations which makes it more fun to read.

Great job dude !

Aaand.. about that last credit sentence, it sounds weird when you're addressing to yourself in third person, you could've just said 'made by me' instead xD
 Post #16
 9th June 2009
Dennab
May 2009
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Damn.
Nice job. :D
 Post #17
 9th June 2009
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Fix the fonts, certain parts of the word appear illegible due to the way the letters overlap over one another. Cool guide though.
 Post #18
 9th June 2009
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Excellent guide, very artistic as well :)
And I didn't think it was phallic, I thought it was a face with huge eyeballs nad a long nose.
 Post #19
 9th June 2009
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Outstanding job. Worht the sticky, a posters bible.
 Post #20
 10th June 2009
Dennab
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Awesome thread, I don't know if I'll be able to follow constructing and not hurting though.
 Post #21
 10th June 2009
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Awesome thread, I don't know if I'll be able to follow constructing and not hurting though.
Haha, I know what you mean, too fun.
 Post #22
 10th June 2009
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But sometimes I like hurting people's feelings :(
 Post #23
 10th June 2009 Last edited by ZomBuster; 10th June 2009 at 09:02AM..
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But sometimes I like hurting people's feelings :(
mods aren't allowed to do that


Bad Comment: It sucks, you need to make some stuff better here and there, in other words it's butt ugly.

Did I do that right?
 Post #24
 10th June 2009
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Dennab
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This tutorial is easy to read, and the color scheme fits incredibly well. I also like the humor.

Marvelously done. I hope this helps the Creationism Corner improve.
 Post #25
 10th June 2009
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mods aren't allowed to do that


Bad Comment: It sucks, you need to make some stuff better here and there, in other words it's butt ugly.

Did I do that right?
totally. spot on. spot on.
 Post #26
 10th June 2009
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But sometimes I like hurting people's feelings :(
Then you are an asshole.
;)
 Post #27
 11th June 2009
Dennab
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I really don't know how to get Gold Member, or some special title, but doesn't these kind of posts kind of earn it?
 Post #28
 11th June 2009
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This is the kind of thread that deserves Respected User
 Post #29
 11th June 2009
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I never really understood the importance of those titles other than to have them

This is the kind of thread that deserves Respected User
cough...cough...can't say i don't agree though ... cough...cough.
 Post #30
 12th June 2009
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Very helpful. Thanks.
 Post #31
 12th June 2009
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This is the kind of thread that deserves Respected User
This.

k00lwhip, stop being humble.
 Post #32
 12th June 2009
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This.

k00lwhip, stop being humble.
i'm asian it's required of me.
 Post #33
 12th June 2009 Last edited by Swebonny; 12th June 2009 at 08:38PM..
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Very nicely done k00lwhip. Heh, but unfortunately it's the board where the problem lies. People will still post shitty replies as they always have done.
Look even Rusty100 is doing it.
 Post #34
 12th June 2009
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Good, thanks.
 Post #35
 13th June 2009
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Crappy guide, might want to clean that up.
 Post #36
 18th June 2009
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Crappy guide, might want to clean that up.
I'm hoping you don't mean that and are trying to be funny. because if not, my self esteem is lowered. : (
 Post #37
 20th June 2009
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Fucking awesome guide.
 Post #38
 20th June 2009
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You should probably fix the K00lnotes' font sizes, I can barely read them.

Bad Comment - Most of your jokes are funny and humorous, however some of your jokes sound like you're an autistic kid trying to make some new friends. (I only said "bad comment" 'cause I couldn't think of a nice way to say that and didn't want to sound like an asshole, no offense. :P)

Other than that, that's probably the best guide that won't be read because most people feel good inside when they're a dick to others!
 Post #39
 21st June 2009
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You should probably fix the K00lnotes' font sizes, I can barely read them.

Bad Comment - Most of your jokes are funny and humorous, however some of your jokes sound like you're an autistic kid trying to make some new friends. (I only said "bad comment" 'cause I couldn't think of a nice way to say that and didn't want to sound like an asshole, no offense. :P)

Other than that, that's probably the best guide that won't be read because most people feel good inside when they're a dick to others!


the jokes aren't the point of why i made this.

also i know.
 Post #40
 23rd June 2009
Dennab
May 2009
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Russian.
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