1. Post #1
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    January 2007
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    Hey fellow facepunchers, recently I've been lurking in the creationism corner and have been realizing that some of us really need help on what we're saying. I'm not saying we're all wrong, but some of our comments here aren't very helpful and sometimes they hurt. So i'm hoping you guys use this guide to help influence your future comments on people's creations. All the art and writings you see here were formulated by yours truly







    Please know though that active constructive criticism doesn't only include the critic, it includes the creator as well. It's partly the creator's job to be able to accept criticism and use it to help himself develop better skills.





    That's it for now, if i think of more lesson's i'll update. or at least try to. I hope this helps : D
    so go on and criticize like no other now that you can. also tell me of spelling errors cause i only looked over it once. Hopefully we'll start seeing more helping than things like "wow gtfo newb" or things along those lines.

    everything (art and writing) was done from scratch and by me, K00lwhip (jcplf)
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  2. Post #2
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    Wow, that's nice. Well put together and stuff. I like the colors too. Hopefully people will follow these, but I doubt the DICKS OF FACEPUNCH will...Once again, good job.

  3. Post #3
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    Sticky, now!
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    hey heres some criticism your guide sucks! haha jk.
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  5. Post #5
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    ha thanks dudes. This does look worthy of being stuck don't it.

    the truth is i just started off the top of my head, no planning whatsoever. so ha.

  6. Post #6
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    Excellent guide. I noticed a spelling error on Lesson 2. You spelled destructive as "descructive".
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  7. Post #7
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    Excellent guide. I noticed a spelling error on Lesson 2. You spelled destructive as "descructive".
    thank you. did not notice that. i shall fix that sometime.

  8. Post #8
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    Stickyed
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  9. Post #9
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    Dude.

    I didn't admit it but getting this stikyed was one of my dreams.

  10. Post #10
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    I just hope people will read this.
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  11. Post #11
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    Congrats on the sticky.

  12. Post #12
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    January 2007
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    I just hope people will read this.
    so do I.

  13. Post #13
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    this tutorial made me 159 all over myself

  14. Post #14
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    this tutorial made me 159 all over myself

    i hope so it took me like 3 hours.

  15. Post #15
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    January 2009
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    Haha amazing

    At first I expected just another boring constructive critism guide ( cause that doesn't interest me =P ), but that "for the creator" part surprised me
    I have to say that it was nicely written, nice use of frames,colors and illustrations which makes it more fun to read.

    Great job dude !

    Aaand.. about that last credit sentence, it sounds weird when you're addressing to yourself in third person, you could've just said 'made by me' instead xD

  16. Post #16
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    May 2009
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    Damn.
    Nice job. :D

  17. Post #17
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    August 2008
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    Fix the fonts, certain parts of the word appear illegible due to the way the letters overlap over one another. Cool guide though.

  18. Post #18
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    November 2007
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    Excellent guide, very artistic as well :)
    And I didn't think it was phallic, I thought it was a face with huge eyeballs nad a long nose.

  19. Post #19
    Dennab
    January 2008
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    Outstanding job. Worht the sticky, a posters bible.

  20. Post #20
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    :cheers: Awesome thread, I don't know if I'll be able to follow constructing and not hurting though.

  21. Post #21
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    :cheers: Awesome thread, I don't know if I'll be able to follow constructing and not hurting though.
    Haha, I know what you mean, too fun.

  22. Post #22
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    But sometimes I like hurting people's feelings :(

  23. Post #23
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    But sometimes I like hurting people's feelings :(
    mods aren't allowed to do that


    Bad Comment: It sucks, you need to make some stuff better here and there, in other words it's butt ugly.

    Did I do that right?

  24. Post #24
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    This tutorial is easy to read, and the color scheme fits incredibly well. I also like the humor.

    Marvelously done. I hope this helps the Creationism Corner improve.

  25. Post #25
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    mods aren't allowed to do that


    Bad Comment: It sucks, you need to make some stuff better here and there, in other words it's butt ugly.

    Did I do that right?
    totally. spot on. spot on.

  26. Post #26
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    But sometimes I like hurting people's feelings :(
    Then you are an asshole.
    ;)

  27. Post #27
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    I really don't know how to get Gold Member, or some special title, but doesn't these kind of posts kind of earn it?

  28. Post #28
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    This is the kind of thread that deserves Respected User

  29. Post #29
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    I never really understood the importance of those titles other than to have them

    This is the kind of thread that deserves Respected User
    cough...cough...can't say i don't agree though ... cough...cough.

  30. Post #30
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    Very helpful. Thanks.

  31. Post #31
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    This is the kind of thread that deserves Respected User
    This.

    k00lwhip, stop being humble.

  32. Post #32
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    January 2007
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    This.

    k00lwhip, stop being humble.
    i'm asian it's required of me.

  33. Post #33
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    August 2006
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    Very nicely done k00lwhip. Heh, but unfortunately it's the board where the problem lies. People will still post shitty replies as they always have done.
    Look even Rusty100 is doing it.

  34. Post #34
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    July 2008
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    Good, thanks.

  35. Post #35
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    March 2006
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    Crappy guide, might want to clean that up.

  36. Post #36
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    Crappy guide, might want to clean that up.
    I'm hoping you don't mean that and are trying to be funny. because if not, my self esteem is lowered. : (

  37. Post #37
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    August 2008
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    Fucking awesome guide.

  38. Post #38
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    June 2009
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    You should probably fix the K00lnotes' font sizes, I can barely read them.

    Bad Comment - Most of your jokes are funny and humorous, however some of your jokes sound like you're an autistic kid trying to make some new friends. (I only said "bad comment" 'cause I couldn't think of a nice way to say that and didn't want to sound like an asshole, no offense. :P)

    Other than that, that's probably the best guide that won't be read because most people feel good inside when they're a dick to others!

  39. Post #39
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    You should probably fix the K00lnotes' font sizes, I can barely read them.

    Bad Comment - Most of your jokes are funny and humorous, however some of your jokes sound like you're an autistic kid trying to make some new friends. (I only said "bad comment" 'cause I couldn't think of a nice way to say that and didn't want to sound like an asshole, no offense. :P)

    Other than that, that's probably the best guide that won't be read because most people feel good inside when they're a dick to others!


    the jokes aren't the point of why i made this.

    also i know.

  40. Post #40
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    Russian.