[smurfy]

Had this idea for ages, finally decided to do it after seeing the other thread. Also allowed me to figure out the demo smoother.

[Odellus]

camera work fucking sucked, fix it.

[smurfy]

No man

[JohnEdwards]

Yeah borealis whoopie! most of episode 3 won't be in borealis it will be going to it

[Marler]

Nah, didn't feel it :(

[smurfy]

Rate box if you liked it.

[Ambo]

Doesn't make sense though because    Eli is dead, so why would he have stuff to tell?   

I think i missed the point

[solid_jake]

Ambo posted:

Doesn't make sense though because    Eli is dead, so why would he have stuff to tell?   

I think i missed the point

maybe eli had something valuable and that's why they killed him? Kind of like why they wanted alyx dead.

[smurfy]

Ambo posted:

Doesn't make sense though because    Eli is dead, so why would he have stuff to tell?   

I think i missed the point

That's what he said at the end of Episode Two, I just played it over this, so it suggests that you're going to find out loadsa shit in Ep3.

[The Pink Scotti]

Nice job

[CannedBeans]

it wasn't good.

it was just a camera smoothed scene with a sound file played over it.

[Crazy_Farmer]

also, the way the camera stopped was awkward

[KingKombat]

I have to say the line was ominous with a nice pan over the Borealis. I have to say good job, though it's REALLY simple, it'd be nice as a teaser.

[Pleather]

pretty good video

[Adamnetwork]

solid_jake posted:

maybe eli had something valuable and that's why they killed him? Kind of like why they wanted alyx dead.

Eli knew EVERYTHING ABOUT the resistance

Alex is a haxer and helps gordon freeman

[AustinM]

What's the Borealis?

[KingKombat]

AustinM posted:

What's the Borealis?

It's the fucking ship.
That belongs to Aperture Science from Portal.

[killa47]

Why can't people just stop making these? They're everywhere and none of them are really convincing.

[Machk]

Meh. It was decent, but needs a bit better camera work. Nice try.

[Alyx Zark]

Simple yet quality, camera needed work and I was hoping for another scene but it's fanmade so I see why. Nice going, have a paintbrush or whatever.

[Lostangeles4]

killa47 posted:

Why can't people just stop making these? They're everywhere and none of them are really convincing.

Because people can only wish EP3 will come out. We know it never will, so it's kinda pointless to make "teasers"

[MS-DOS4]

Could have used 2 or 3 more angles showing off different parts of the ship.

Also, don't stop the camera then fade out, fade out while the camera still moves. If you must stop the camera before fading out, smoothly slow it down to a stop.

[DrStalin]

I love it, Short, simple and just mysterious. You did a great job. People are just finding stuff to pick at.

[Lagitech]

It was laggy and the "Episode Three" -zoom-in looked odd because you used image, not text.

But still a nice vid, you're Artistic.

[PoloXGS]

KingKombat posted:

It's the fucking ship.

fucking ship? What's wrong with normal ships?

[smurfy]

MS-DOS4 posted:

Could have used 2 or 3 more angles showing off different parts of the ship.

I couldn't because half the ship is see-through :S

MS-DOS4 posted:

If you must stop the camera before fading out, smoothly slow it down to a stop.

That's what was meant to happen but demo smoother hates me.

It was meant to be longer but Eli didn't talk enough.