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Post #3561
Apparently I'm a work-a-holic.
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You really don't have to upload a song once a day tbh.
Just upload it when it's finished man
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The Union Jack would look a shit ton better with a Hammer and Sickle in the middle of it
November 2007
6,742 Posts
in all honesty your work generally sounds rushed and always seems a little thin. maybe you should work on mixing down a small 20 second loop for a few days and perfecting them before putting out entire full length tracks every day.
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It's not a new track, just a new stage of a song, it's now in its 6th stage, and I improve it upon feedback and if I agree.
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I can't find the "Creative music that doesn't deserve a thread" so I'll post this here.
Heavily influenced by Mr. Bungle, Fantomas and Mike Patton.
Edit: Hmm, listening to through my pc-speakers, I need to ease up on the vocal distortion a little.
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Just left the song as a demo, I'm going to take the advice from others and just make demo's whilst working on my mixing.
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How is this? I have changed more on guitar so not crackly mess now I think but I'm not sure what you mean with busting drums, if you wouldn't mind could you give a bit more inside explanation?
This has sound like you play a song but computer sound card is dying or computer crashing so I guess you accomplished what your thought with song was I think as intro or maybe even as outro this can work extremely well
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The Union Jack would look a shit ton better with a Hammer and Sickle in the middle of it
November 2007
6,742 Posts
my mistake, i meant bursting, it hits really hard in the old version but now it seems a little too weak. try turning the bass down on it and throw some compressors in thereHow is this? I have changed more on guitar so not crackly mess now I think but I'm not sure what you mean with busting drums, if you wouldn't mind could you give a bit more inside explanation?
This has sound like you play a song but computer sound card is dying or computer crashing so I guess you accomplished what your thought with song was I think as intro or maybe even as outro this can work extremely well
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literally a 30 second tittyfuck i recorded before i went to work earlier today. unfinished in all aspects of the word, but i thought it sounded cool as it was. imagine a slow drum beat kicking in after this, i think it would sound raw as fuck
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and again, just used my shitty webcam mic for this, i will record it in much better quality later
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Here's some corny little song I did, I would love some constructive criticism.
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sounds pretty cool man, i like it. maybe it's just me but it kind of seems to get tiring after a bit. the beat is alright but not much seems to be happening throughout, or not much interesting enough to hook me at least. its not bad though, definitely a solid track
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new demo
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I really can't tell, does this mix/melody sound coherent? Mainly concerning the lead synth melody at the last part of the build-up.
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Bass levels are a bit messed up atm and the intro is hella repetitive.
But hey, I made progress.
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C&C please guys
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maybe you should also give c&c to other people
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This is a really really good point right here.maybe you should also give c&c to other people
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did you see that wall of text i gave to you on the last page btw dead madman?
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Yes I did, and sorry for not giving C&C, I'm busy focusing on my own tracks, I apologise though guys, I will most definitely start giving feedback
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It sounds coherent enough to me.
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Reminds me of Deadmau5, I like it.
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Ugh, it's annoying because to make good music you have to have good skill and inspiration, but I lack both at the moment, because I've wasted all inspiration with songs made with bad skill. But the only way to get good skill is to make songs which also requires inspiration. I was able squeezed all my residual inspiration out for this, I think it has a cheezy melody, I'm going to try to make it darker.
I've tried to take some critique of my other songs into account, what are some things I need to improve?
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Any ideas of where I could go next with this? It's just a little bit experimentation, but I'm hoping to put a lot of time into it in the near future. Right now though, I'm pretty low on ideas.
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here listen to some dubstep i made:
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I feel the need to argue about this but it's so mellow i'd rather not.
i want to give you money
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This is so good, I love it when the drums come in. They're real but also heavy. Omg this is so good. The melody is so chill, but also hype enough for maybe even a party.
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I changed things, is it any better?
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I don't know if this is the place for covers... if it isn't I'll replace this link with something different.
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the song is good, but it's just not unique. it just sounds like typical electronic music. you need to get a hook in there. like, extend the air raid siren or something to make it a theme. just do something, because it really sounds samey, especially when you compare it to stuff you've done before.
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Liking this. Sounds kinda dissonant (perhaps a little too much), but I like that.
Got back into hardstyle a little today, worked on this:
Pretty satisfied with the kick.
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Holy shit this is fantastic! The intro was a wee bit too long imo
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Thanks man :)
I know about the intro, I'll work on it some more later.
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Now I feel like a dick by not giving you some C&C on your track, so here goes:
Sounds phat and pumping, so nice job on that. The bass comes across nicely on my headphones, but it might be nice to have it break out of its pattern every 8 bars or so. Like, have it pitch up or something. This isn't really my kind of music/genre, so I don't really know what else to say though
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This is a terrible cover but i guess if that was purpose then congratulations you succeeded
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Why tell him it's terrible and then not tell him why it's terrible and what he has to improve on.This is a terrible cover but i guess if that was purpose then congratulations you succeeded
That's just rude.
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admittedly yeah, I was just fucking about... but you SHOULD give constructive criticism next time.This is a terrible cover but i guess if that was purpose then congratulations you succeeded
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Yes you are correct so here is why I think it is bad cover
Guitar is not in tempo with rest of song (you can fix with just playing more for future recording)
Guitar has really bad tone (just make guitar tone opposite of what you currently have)
Riff is just weird (i am thinking about that thing after you play powerchords)
In short if you want to make cover do not do it like this current cover
Good thing is you look abit like andrew w.k who is hero of me so even if I hate cover I still think youre cool
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With so much Dubstep and Electro nowadays I'm trying out different Genres. I was inspired by the old Infected Mushroom with this track.
Warning cheesy beginning:
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Sounds great! I don't know what it is but there seems to be like a lack of depth, it sounds very basic, but that doesn't mean it sounds shit. Great job
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No you're not.. :P
But nice track regardless!
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Some light progressive house song I'm making, I know it's basic as fuck, but I really want it to be kind of chill.
I should probably lower the tempo to about 120-
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I've updated it (replaced the file, so it's the same link)
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