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Post #4081Thank you! I'm glad you like it!
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so i got inspired and worked on this little gem last night/this morning.
CC please.
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The intro was good, the buildup with the gunshots (whatever they were) got me sucked in. However after the 36 second mark they got a little too intese, and just drowned out every other musical aspect.
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We were kind of joking around when we did the 36~ area, we were like "look we can just make this a disaster" but then I decided to make the rest of it serious. After my dentists appointment I'll clean that part up, make it sound pretty.
Also yeah, all the sounds are gunshots except the Piano, Kick, Hat, and little techno thing during the phone call.
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Also I want people to be BRUTALLY honest. Because I've already had one person say "dude that blows" I want to make sure it's not just his personal taste conflicting, and that it actually blows.
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Added some alternative melody that kicks in at bar three. I also uploaded an MP3 rather than recording it, because last time I wasn't statisfied with the quality. I think it sounds a bit better now. I'm currently trying to incorporate some Aphex Twin style drums, but progress is slow.
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I was feeling kinda pissed off yesterday so I was just messing around with the piano and recorded this; what do you guys think?
This is by no means a very good song, its just something that happened.
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Cleaned up 0:36. better? y/n
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I like what you've tried to do with the gunshots and love the intro/breaks but to be
honest it kind of sounds really brutal and bit of a mess.
Don't think anyone could listen to that and say they could stick it on and just listen to it in their spare time...
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The Union Jack would look a shit ton better with a Hammer and Sickle in the middle of it
November 2007
6,765 Posts
what are you doing
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Experimenting, man! No one ever got anywhere by sticking to the norm.
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But really, my goal is to make that beat listen-able. Any suggestions?
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The Union Jack would look a shit ton better with a Hammer and Sickle in the middle of it
November 2007
6,765 Posts
a columbine 911 call and a fuckton of gun samples, its just tasteless. if you want to experiment, stop spamming samples and try putting effort into a sound thats never been achieved before.
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why. seriously why
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Default FL samples
unsure if trolling
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Btw some electro house track I made
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Something I made in few hours.
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I started this last night, kind of a more dance feeling than a happy hardcore.
The intro sounds a little weird, but I can't pinpoint what is wrong with it
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The Union Jack would look a shit ton better with a Hammer and Sickle in the middle of it
November 2007
6,765 Posts
i like this alot. that wum wum wum sound fits great after the drop, but then it seems a little lazy about 8 bars in. then the transition to the breakdown doesnt really make any sense. if you could make it sound just a little more unique and bouncy with the drumwork and flow together a bit more, youd have another great track. (work on the eqing too but i think i say that so much now its obvious)
this is pretty good, you mixed it down pretty well but that snare is sticking out for me a little and sounds a bit annoying. it has a pretty low-fi sound, not sure if you were going for it or not but it sounds pretty cool and as a whole the track flows nicely. keep going and you should come out with some more exciting stuff soon!
i dont think the intro sounds weird, other than the melody which doesnt really fit with the drop's melody, but it feels as if the track builds up to nowhere. dunno, work on the structure a bit more and it should be cool
i made a song 2
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I like this a lot. Just sounds too well produced for my liking.
Well... it's time for my leave. Have a good time posting songs and not listening or criticizing. I really tried to help (Everyone except the horrible house musicians. Sorry but it's not creative, it's just following formula :/ ) The only tracks you people seem to comment back on are trolls, which is clearly useless.
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I'll take that as a compliment.. but could you explain what you mean by too well produced? I'd like to know.
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I think he's talking about the way it's mastered or whatever. When I turn it up it strains my ears because it's almost too crisp.
Current piece I'm working on. I really like the intro I have on this one, I just need to clean up some of the repetitive parts at some points and clean up some synths. Any CC would be appreciated.
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Added some drums, and other minor adjustments.
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Sounds preety good. Theres not much to pick on really, but I think your choice in chord changes makes for a dissonant sound rather than a pleasant (I forgot the musical term) one. I don't know, maybe that was what you were going for! It's good to try something diffirent.
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http://www23.zippyshare.com/v/72815812/file.html
Cosmic love remix, should i continue making it?
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Hey guys, after hearing from the production community as a whole to try and produce in Ableton rather than FL, I tried something out:
My workflow in FL really helped me out with using advanced shit in Ableton
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Never ask that from anyone else than yourself dude
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continued my first try on Ableton's project, I think it sounds fairly OK. I don't plan on making it into a full song, but it's just a test on Ableton and how I can produce on it
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sounds like i got punched in the face
which is exactly what you want at a club after a couple.
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what y'all think?
got some more here: http://soundcloud.com/danny-picard-lemieux
oh no, not my real name! *not giving a shit*
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I like it, nice chord progression.
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you are a copycat!
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Something that came together quite nicely while just experimenting. I was messing around with drums/percussion, and I'm really happy with how it turned out!
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the third version of my first Ableton song, working on mastering and making it longer (hot)
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I miss my beautiful Lord_Schrotty because my master Eternalflamez killed him
January 2010
5,827 Posts
My dubstep song intro
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Here's a song I've done. If anyone has constructive criticism I would gladly appreciate it.
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The Union Jack would look a shit ton better with a Hammer and Sickle in the middle of it
November 2007
6,765 Posts
this is wicked sick, reminds me of one of the more ambient mass effect themes. its great, could use some compression on some of the synths, bring out the low end a little more and tone down the reverb; but please dont turn it into a 'filthy' dubstep mix! youve got some real musical art in there and it would be a shame to turn it into a gimmick.
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I miss my beautiful Lord_Schrotty because my master Eternalflamez killed him
January 2010
5,827 Posts
Thanks! Every feedback is important to me and i will change this in a song.
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Holy shit overpain! You have really improved! Get more experimental, but keep the melodies.
I don't know if anyone will like it, I can't tell if it's awful, I need a peripheral opinion.
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I like it. It's kind of like Acid without the glitchy drums.
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It's not finished, the melody won't repeat over and over when I finish
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Does not sound right at all, everything to me is not in key or anything (it just sounds random to be honest). However, that intro without all that noise underneath it could be decent. Everything after the 1.20 mark is just noise to me. Maybe it will sound better once you get the melody done, still don't know if that is the genre, but everything else on your soundcloud sounds decent!
Also, I don't think anyone saw my post on the last page. I'm working on a song with a friend, and I'm wanting some constructive feedback on it, do you guys mind if you have a listen?
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The Union Jack would look a shit ton better with a Hammer and Sickle in the middle of it
November 2007
6,765 Posts
criticism pls or i will eat ur cat
atta 2 end rates dumb cause he gets angry over the internet lololool HOW BOUT THAT DRAMA
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