1. Post #4121
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    Croix's Avatar
    May 2008
    2,748 Posts
    Pretty nice, I love your stuff. These luffy things you've made sound a little too much like pop for my taste, but the melodies and harmonies are really pleasant. The drums are kinda boring though
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  2. Post #4122
    The Union Jack would look a shit ton better with a Hammer and Sickle in the middle of it
    Bobie's Avatar
    November 2007
    7,289 Posts
    Pretty nice, I love your stuff. These luffy things you've made sound a little too much like pop for my taste, but the melodies and harmonies are really pleasant. The drums are kinda boring though
    thanks! i mixed the drums down at like 3 am this morning so i completely got rid of the hi hats and pops and stuff by accident when they actually sounded quite nice. but ill try to make them sound easier to listen to; thanks for the criticism!
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  3. Post #4123
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    chaz13's Avatar
    August 2005
    2,214 Posts
    More of that neurofunk remix I'm working on.


    Would love to hear some criticism on it.
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  4. Post #4124
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    redBadger's Avatar
    November 2008
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    -snip-
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  5. Post #4125
    I once watched a girl get eaten by a horse and it was bad
    Dead Madman's Avatar
    December 2008
    5,708 Posts


    criticism pls or i will eat ur cat atta 2 end rates dumb cause he gets angry over the internet lololool HOW BOUT THAT DRAMA
    Fucking great shit, Bobie!

    here's my latest track:

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  6. Post #4126
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  7. Post #4127
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    January 2012
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  8. Post #4128
    how can you love some-one if you can't eat a brick
    phytocide's Avatar
    July 2011
    1,320 Posts
    my friend was making some weird vocaloid tracks, i told him i could make one. so i did. as fast as i could.


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  9. Post #4129
    Atta|To|End's Avatar
    August 2009
    953 Posts
    my friend was making some weird vocaloid tracks, i told him i could make one. so i did. as fast as i could.

    Is funny yes.
    Better drums (excluding bass derum) and it would be a song though.

    Edited:

    I still love your tracks. Very creative and interesting. People who say it is out of tune don't understand the concept of music.

    Edited:

    WHY WON'T YOU PEOPLE LOVE ME!

    Oh wait... I know why.
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  10. Post #4130
    sixpence's Avatar
    January 2012
    480 Posts
    It's nice, I wish it was longer, especially the part with the minimal use of the guitar and the violin samples

    Edited:

    I made an edm (everything I post?)
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  11. Post #4131
    CLungcancer's Avatar
    August 2008
    1,592 Posts
    This is fucking amazing. I want to download it
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  12. Post #4132

    December 2009
    108 Posts

    Went crazy with some LFO. Trying to think of a way to make it into a song.
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  13. Post #4133
    Dennab
    January 2011
    3,540 Posts
    is it okay for me to post other people's work here? didn't really see a share thread other than this
    this guy has inspired me in more ways than one, i've been listening to his songs for a while now and his songs have helped me to follow my dreams and actually do the things I want to do
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  15. Post #4135
    Atta|To|End's Avatar
    August 2009
    953 Posts
    It's nice, I wish it was longer, especially the part with the minimal use of the guitar and the violin samples

    Edited:

    I made an edm (everything I post?)
    Thanks, but I'm making tracks as fast as possible to dj with. I don't have a lot of time to make finished songs, and selling them would be illegal with the samples I use.

    Please take out the synth that starts at 1:16

    Edited:


    Went crazy with some LFO. Trying to think of a way to make it into a song.
    You make some good sounds, now go and make some amazing songs! If you can't think of a way to use it, just go for it.
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  16. Post #4136
    I once watched a girl get eaten by a horse and it was bad
    Dead Madman's Avatar
    December 2008
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  17. Post #4137
    sixpence's Avatar
    January 2012
    480 Posts
    If you can't think of a way to use it, just go for it.
    You sound like Oblique Strategies
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  18. Post #4138
    IplayAspy's Avatar
    November 2008
    1,266 Posts
    Heavy WIP track I'm working on, I got a feeling the intro phase seems a bit empty as if its lacking something to make it sound busy.

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  20. Post #4140
    [b][highlight][size=+10]STOP LIKING WHAT I DON'T[/size][/highlight][/b]
    Anax's Avatar
    January 2009
    2,025 Posts
    Tried being a bit more experimental, not done yet.
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  21. Post #4141
    sixpence's Avatar
    January 2012
    480 Posts
    Tried being a bit more experimental, not done yet.
    I like this A LOT! The melody is perfect. I need to see your soundcloud. Yes, some really good stuff there. You could be a real musician!
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  22. Post #4142
    supafly1337's Avatar
    January 2010
    599 Posts
    Liking everyone's style here, lots of variety.

    http://soundcloud.com/supaflymusic/new-track-teaser

    I don't really know where to go with this.

    Thoughts?
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  23. Post #4143
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    Electroholic's Avatar
    June 2011
    2,339 Posts
    FL studio keeps crashing lately, I think its time to learn ableton or Reason












    I think this is one of my better projects.

    Edited:
    Extended the song and touched it up a bit more
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  24. Post #4144
    sixpence's Avatar
    January 2012
    480 Posts
    Liking everyone's style here, lots of variety.

    http://soundcloud.com/supaflymusic/new-track-teaser

    I don't really know where to go with this.

    Thoughts?
    I'm really liking it, except the :19 stuff, that part's not as polished.

    And I made this quickly, it's not finished, I just started but I want to show it to see if its okay.
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  25. Post #4145
    supafly1337's Avatar
    January 2010
    599 Posts
    I'm really liking it, except the :19 stuff, that part's not as polished.

    And I made this quickly, it's not finished, I just started but I want to show it to see if its okay.
    I like it, just sounds a bit too static-y for my tastes.
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  26. Post #4146
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    killa101's Avatar
    November 2005
    2,731 Posts
    Just released an album on bandcamp, what do you guys think?

    http://wakethephantom.bandcamp.com/album/into-the-deep
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  27. Post #4147
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    February 2011
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  28. Post #4148
    Dennab
    March 2010
    2,002 Posts
    Husmus:


       La Puvi is an anagram of (latin) pluvia, rain.   

    Don't get mad when all my songs henceforth have some rain, as I'll be trying to find a beat that goes best with this as I go.
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  29. Post #4149
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    May 2010
    758 Posts
    Husmus:


       La Puvi is an anagram of (latin) pluvia, rain.   

    Don't get mad when all my songs henceforth have some rain, as I'll be trying to find a beat that goes best with this as I go.
    I get mad at you when you don't finish your songs man. You really have a beautiful talent.
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  31. Post #4151
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    ScreamingGerbil's Avatar
    July 2010
    1,041 Posts
    Somethin' I'm working on. Any advice is good advice with this one!

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pbhcXzL-dv4
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  32. Post #4152
    CLungcancer's Avatar
    August 2008
    1,592 Posts
    The melody feels.. kinda random. I wish it was more consistent, it would be a pretty cool song.

    I had this song lost for a while, found it some days ago and started working on it again. It's my most favourite thing I've done for now:
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  33. Post #4153
    The Union Jack would look a shit ton better with a Hammer and Sickle in the middle of it
    Bobie's Avatar
    November 2007
    7,289 Posts
    The melody feels.. kinda random. I wish it was more consistent, it would be a pretty cool song.

    I had this song lost for a while, found it some days ago and started working on it again. It's my most favourite thing I've done for now:
    i really like this. trippy as fuck and the synths go really well alongside the more natural elements. are the drums yours?


    let me know how this shits goin down
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  34. Post #4154
    supafly1337's Avatar
    January 2010
    599 Posts
    i really like this. trippy as fuck and the synths go really well alongside the more natural elements. are the drums yours?


    let me know how this shits goin down
    Sounds pretty good, the kicks sound strange to me though.

    http://soundcloud.com/supaflymusic/e...ng-is-terrible

    Anyone want to give some opinions on this?
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  35. Post #4155
    sixpence's Avatar
    January 2012
    480 Posts
    Sounds pretty good, the kicks sound strange to me though.

    http://soundcloud.com/supaflymusic/e...ng-is-terrible

    Anyone want to give some opinions on this?
    You have some great sounds, but your melody doesn't sound good to the ears. Imagine yourself hearing this song, would hum it later? Try to get a memorable melody. Of course not all dance music has to have melody, but it is difficult to make such music, and I wouldn't listen to it.

    What do you guys think of this? I want to start moving into a different style of music, one that I would like, this one of the first steps (even though it's not that good, it would sound better if it had some nice lyrics).
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  36. Post #4156
    CLungcancer's Avatar
    August 2008
    1,592 Posts
    i really like this. trippy as fuck and the synths go really well alongside the more natural elements. are the drums yours?
    Yeah, I had some jazz samples lying around and decided to give it a go.

    What can I say? I love it. The hihat near the end breaks my ears though.

    Edited:

    Sounds pretty good, the kicks sound strange to me though.

    http://soundcloud.com/supaflymusic/e...ng-is-terrible

    Anyone want to give some opinions on this?
    Work on the melody, it's way too random right now. Listen to some other music with strong melodies, analyze them and try to learn from them. Remaking melodies is a good way to learn too.

    Edited:

    You have some great sounds, but your melody doesn't sound good to the ears. Imagine yourself hearing this song, would hum it later? Try to get a memorable melody. Of course not all dance music has to have melody, but it is difficult to make such music, and I wouldn't listen to it.

    Listen to Soundcloud recording



    http://soundcloud.com/its-a-kid/courtyard-memories



    What do you guys think of this? I want to start moving into a different style of music, one that I would like, this one of the first steps (even though it's not that good, it would sound better if it had some nice lyrics).
    I hate the drums. They drive me crazy. But the melodies and sounds are pretty interesting and catchy
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  37. Post #4157
    Atta|To|End's Avatar
    August 2009
    953 Posts
    Sorry that I don't have time to criticize at the moment. I promise I will later tonight.
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  38. Post #4158
    sixpence's Avatar
    January 2012
    480 Posts
    Sorry that I don't have time to criticize at the moment. I promise I will later tonight.
    This is amazing! There is nothing I can say against it, I've thought for a while about it so I don't seem like a circle jerker, but I can't find anything bad about it,.



    I tried fixing the percussion, I added main drums that come in at a point

    and I made this
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  39. Post #4159
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    blah2's Avatar
    August 2005
    1,602 Posts
    I am working on a remix on James Stefano's song even if the competition is over. I will update you guys when I finish it. :)
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  40. Post #4160
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    TimeBomb's Avatar
    May 2006
    655 Posts
    I literally have no clue how to do electronic type things and I guess this is the first venture into it. Does anyone know what else I could do with this or at the least have some tutorials that you swear by that I could have some fun with?
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