1. Post #1
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    April 2006
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    (The one in the middle and the one to the right of him aren't in the band anymore)

    Hey guys, this is my band Her Words My Blood. We're a metalcore band from Southern California, who hope to get somewhere eventually. We've played shows with Jamie's Elsewhere, Arsonists Get All The Girls, Murder Death Kill, and the locally famous Bears Among Men. Here's some videos from one of our past shows.

    Thanks For The Promises

    It Was All Taylor's Idea

    Templeton: The Loneliest Sea Turtle (we changed the name after the show)

    Let me know what you think of us!
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    Rammlied's Avatar
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    Vocals suck honestly, and it's not because he's screaming.
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    Dennab
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    Oh man, terrible vocals.
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    IplayAspy's Avatar
    November 2008
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    He is nowhere near Metalcore vocals, thank god you got rid of him.

  5. Post #5
    fpmankills's Avatar
    September 2008
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    Please get a new video, the instruments are good, but that vocalist, ew.

  6. Post #6
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    All of the above is one of the reasons he's out. There's other videos of us, but they're just from other shows, still with that vocalist. We're in the process of looking for a new one.
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  7. Post #7
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    November 2006
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    Get a better vocalist next time.

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    Which one are you?

  9. Post #9
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    I only looked at the first 25 seconds of the video and the band members to know I wouldn't like this band. You seem like typical "Scene" kids...
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    deggie's Avatar
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    I don't know what the drummer is doing in Templeton

  11. Post #11
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    I don't know what the drummer is doing in Templeton
    I honestly don't know either, we haven't got our shit together really. In the promo I posted I'm the one on the far left, except without the scene as fuck hair anymore.
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    except without the scene as fuck hair anymore.
    Thank the lord!

    Anyway, uh, I don't like it, might just be me hating music with more than one guitar or something. Nah but really, it's okay stuff for what it is, but the drummer is pretty not good at all, and it all seems fairly messy.

  13. Post #13
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    Terrible
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    I have to agree with Karlos, it's terrible, you guys looks like emos.
    You guys are wearing women clothning.

    Start a band and start getting cooler styles.
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    January 2006
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    Wow, you guys look like massive tools, and you look like every other post-hardcore/metalcore band ever.
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  16. Post #16
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    It's your guy's fault that you want to become gayish and emo.

    Tokio Hotel is my favorite.

    Edited:

    Also you guys want to be like these kinda emos?
    http://i301.photobucket.com/albums/nn75/Reedwaits/Scenewanksta.jpg

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    I have to agree with Karlos, it's terrible, you guys looks like emos.
    You guys are wearing women clothning.

    Start a band and start getting cooler styles.
    How are our clothing 'womens'? We just wear clothes that fit, its kinda logical.

    Also, who said anything about wanting to be gayish, or emo?

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    How are our clothing 'womens'? We just wear clothes that fit, its kinda logical.

    Also, who said anything about wanting to be gayish, or emo?
    This said it:


    Besides the guy with the beard. He could be a pirate and pirates are cool.
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    This said it:


    Besides the guy with the beard. He could be a pirate and pirates are cool.
    So wearing clothes that are in style makes you emo? Fuck.
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    So wearing clothes that are in style makes you emo? Fuck.
    I suppose you've never heard about these that dress with women clothning and make up.
    Excuse my posts, I may be abit harsh. But it is all critisizm.

  21. Post #21
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    I suppose you've never heard about these that dress with women clothning and make up.
    Excuse my posts, I may be abit harsh. But it is all critisizm.
    I get what you're saying, but no, we're not going for the Black Veil Brides/whatever scenecore band you posted look.

  22. Post #22
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    him
    that mother fucker right there
    who the fuck is he
    i want to knock his door down and beat him with a dildo
    the middle one
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    him
    i want to knock his door down and beat him with a dildo
    :q:
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    Other then the vocalist being terrible, stage presence was lacking in the first two, guys seem kinda lost and confused, not my type of music but better than the metalcore bands we have around here

  25. Post #25
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    May 2006
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    You guys have the worst stage presence ever. There's some effort there, but most of it is just awkward standing.

  26. Post #26
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    April 2006
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    I'll have some more videos after our show on Monday, we're trying out a new vocalist and rhythm guitarist for that show.

  27. Post #27
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    February 2006
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    Good luck and Godspeed.

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    Don't listen to these jerks... i think you guys rock n your style is fine there's nothing wrong with it. :)

  29. Post #29
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    January 2011
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    You all look so.. awkward in the videos. Like, even when you try to move with the music, you all just look stiff and awkward looking. Not a fan of the genre, so I can't really compare you too other bands of the same style. Just work on your stage presence, cause really it made me feel uncomfortable watching haha.

    Oh and I hope you're not trying to be Asking Alex-whatever with that synth.

  30. Post #30
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    Don't listen to these jerks... i think you guys rock n your style is fine there's nothing wrong with it. :)
    nice, registering a new account to compliment yourself, smooth going
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  31. Post #31
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    April 2011
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    It's impossible to make out if you play good or bad in the live videos because of the terrible quality, and your stage presence is really, really stiff. Don't do stuff because you feel that "it's part of the music" but do it because you enjoy the music. It looks like you're just doing the moves without feeling it.

  32. Post #32
    Peppermint's Avatar
    September 2010
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    No offense but stuff like this sounds all the same and you seem like another carbon copy of all the other metal whatever bands.
    You all have the same looks, the same moves... its pretty boring.
    This is just my opinion.

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    Dennab
    May 2006
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    try practicing and try not writing awful fucking music

  34. Post #34
    I let my little brother, who is a huge metal fan, listen to this music. He said it was bad and that he could do even better on his own (he's really bad - still better I guess).

    I'd say you drop the screamo shit and take on a new style. Improve your stage presence and image. Cut your hair off, put on some manly clothes and if you sing, sing, don't scream.

    If you take your band into a new direction it might turn out not to be bad.
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  35. Post #35
    Dick Tracy's Avatar
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    If they enjoy this music then they shouldn't drop it, HOWEVER you are very much right about stage presence, it looks like they're just doing the manouvers without feeling it and it makes it look robotic. Take the music and do something new with it, surely you guys must listen to other music beyond Screamo?
    Try to take those influences and mix them with screamo, make it your own.

  36. Post #36
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    I didn't read the other posts because I didn't want to be persuaded by other peoples opinions.

    I honestly think the vocals suck. The whole feel of it was horrible too. The stage presence just blah.

    Everyone doing that little hair flip in time with the beat? Really? That doesn't look good. You have to get the crowed into it. Clearly the crowed doesn't care. I think everything could use a lot of work before you "make it". If you ever do.

    Also, I hope this type of music isn't the only thing you listen to. You need to listen to a huge variety to get a feel of different styles and use them.

    Take this band for example (shameless self promotion, I help out with this band a lot and am the official cowbell spokesman (it's a real job, shut up) jk).



    This isn't the same genre as you are trying to play, however I think it gives you an idea what I mean when I say try to incorporate other types of music. The songs take from different elements of different types of music and combines it into something pretty neat.
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  37. Post #37
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    Well, just as a little update, the old band pretty much disintegrated, and we got a bunch of new members and became Reborn As One. New vocalist, bassist, lead guitar, and drummer. We opened for Lions!Tigers!Bears! last night, it was a pretty fun show.


    Edit: Our drummer joined a day before the show as a replacement since ours was forced to leave by his parents, we didn't really have time to get everything down on drums except for the third song, so the rest are KINDA derp on drums.

  38. Post #38
    MrTwicks's Avatar
    November 2009
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    reminds me of that bullet for my valentine song, your band name that is

  39. Post #39
    Dick Tracy's Avatar
    April 2011
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    It all sounds exactly the same, I'm not sure if that's because of the terrible camera or because you guys however. Record some stuff profesionally(ish, you can just get one of those $100 recorders and record every instrument and put them together) so that we can judge your music, because it sure as hell is really hard to do that with the poor quality of the recordings.

  40. Post #40
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    November 2006
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    still sounds like shit to me, but that might be just because i really dislike this kind of music