1. Post #1

    October 2011
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    I made a video with many forms of the muzzle flash.

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lCAchPhmq_0

    Constructive Criticism is allowed, assholes will be ignored.
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  2. Post #2
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    December 2009
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    I'm sorry, but they honestly suck. The giant one isn't a muzzle flash, the second one is just a sprite pasted on, stubborn is the same thing, but it doesn't even stay near the gun. I guess the other ones were alright.
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    sweet haircut
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  4. Post #4

    October 2011
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    I'm sorry, but they honestly suck. The giant one isn't a muzzle flash, the second one is just a sprite pasted on, stubborn is the same thing, but it doesn't even stay near the gun. I guess the other ones were alright.
    Im sorry, but are you fucking stupid? Yes, it is giant. It takes up the whole porch. Yeah, its just a
    sprite pasted on, but is there any other way to get it to stick to the top of the gun? Yeah, didnt think so. You got the whole idea of stubborn wrong, its kind of saying that the muzzle flash is STUBBORN by not moving with the gun and staying in one place.

    Edited:

    sweet haircut
    Thanks bro!
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    omg this is the best thing ever
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  6. Post #6

    October 2011
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    omg this is the best thing ever
    Dude if you think thats good than your an idiot. The only good thing about that was the music that I
    didnt make and depending on who you talk to the storyline.
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  7. Post #7
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    oh sorry my mistake
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  8. Post #8

    October 2011
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    oh sorry my mistake
    I know this is all sarcasm but im just playing along
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  9. Post #9
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    thank fuck for that
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  10. Post #10
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    March 2009
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    Im sorry, but are you fucking stupid? Yes, it is giant. It takes up the whole porch. Yeah, its just a
    sprite pasted on, but is there any other way to get it to stick to the top of the gun? Yeah, didnt think so. You got the whole idea of stubborn wrong, its kind of saying that the muzzle flash is STUBBORN by not moving with the gun and staying in one place.

    You take constructive criticism, as you asked for in the OP, very well.
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  11. Post #11

    October 2011
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    You take constructive criticism, as you asked for in the OP, very well.
    I dont see what I did wrong. I went over everything he said, and proved most of it wrong.
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  12. Post #12
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    I dont see what I did wrong. I went over everything he said, and proved most of it wrong.
    Hahahaaaa

    This is going to be an interesting thread
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  13. Post #13
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    March 2009
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    I dont see what I did wrong. I went over everything he said, and proved most of it wrong.
    You insulted him, If its not clear enough. You also made your self seem 100% ignorant in the post. You may want to read it over, you'll probably see what I mean.
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  14. Post #14

    October 2011
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    You insulted him, If its not clear enough. You also made your self seem 100% ignorant in the post. You may want to read it over, you'll probably see what I mean.
    I see exactly what you mean. Everyones always insulting me...so yeah. Just trying to fit in I guess. And I wasnt being ignorant, just telling him he was wrong.
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    March 2009
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    I see exactly what you mean. Everyones always insulting me...so yeah. Just trying to fit in I guess. And I wasnt being ignorant, just telling him he was wrong.
    A tip, He can't be wrong if he's giving his opinion.
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  16. Post #16

    October 2011
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    A tip, He can't be wrong if he's giving his opinion.
    Hmm... I guess wrong was the wrong word to use there. I guess his opinion was... well first off saying
    that it isnt even big WAS wrong, and the others were him not understanding the point of the video. Now, can we turn this into a thread about the video or are we going to argue about different ways to take criticism?

  17. Post #17
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    gimme ur lunch money
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  18. Post #18

    October 2011
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    gimme ur lunch money
    No
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  19. Post #19
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    April 2010
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    Not a very good job, it looks like just a couple of sprites and .gifs pasted into the video. And you look like you're twelve. You might check out Freddie Wong's work ( http://www.youtube.com/user/freddiew ) for a little bit of inspiration.
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    omg this is the best thing ever
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    Hmm... I guess wrong was the wrong word to use there. I guess his opinion was... well first off saying
    that it isnt even big WAS wrong, and the others were him not understanding the point of the video. Now, can we turn this into a thread about the video or are we going to argue about different ways to take criticism?
    If he didn't understand the video then you are the one to blame. Kinda the whole point of making films is so people can see them, and if your audience doesn't understand the video then you need to change things.

  22. Post #22

    October 2011
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    Not a very good job, it looks like just a couple of sprites and .gifs pasted into the video. And you look like you're twelve. You might check out Freddie Wong's work ( http://www.youtube.com/user/freddiew ) for a little bit of inspiration.
    I know about freddiew and I did excactly what he did. Its the same stock footage (action essesntails 2) that he used.

    Edited:

    If he didn't understand the video then you are the one to blame. Kinda the whole point of making films is so people can see them, and if your audience doesn't understand the video then you need to change things.
    Well I dont see why nobody understands it. Could somebody tell me what you dont understand?

    Edited:

    Yes, I understand I was a kid back then and I failed at making videos.
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  23. Post #23
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    Yes, I understand I was a kid back then and I failed at making videos.
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  24. Post #24

    October 2011
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    Umm, yeah. I was a kid back then.
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  25. Post #25
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    long time ago back in the days of Nov 3, 2011
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  26. Post #26

    October 2011
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    long time ago back in the days of Nov 3, 2011
    Really? You call 14 year olds kids? Well, I guess each person has their own opinion.
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  27. Post #27
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    Really? You call 14 year olds kids? Well, I guess each person has their own opinion.
    Get out. NOW!
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  28. Post #28

    October 2011
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    Get out. NOW!
    Trust me, ive been meaning to. I dont like sites full of assholes. Some of you people are nice, like
    Mr. Badcop (I think thats his name) but when I make a video you guys get mad at me because its not
    as good as freddiew or corridordigital. Well facepunch, goodbye.
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  29. Post #29
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    May 2007
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    Trust me, ive been meaning to. I dont like sites full of assholes. Some of you people are nice, like
    Mr. Badcop (I think thats his name) but when I make a video you guys get mad at me because its not
    as good as freddiew or corridordigital. Well facepunch, goodbye.
    Your videos are for 12 years old. You should grow up and come back then. No one likes your videos because they're shit. Accept it
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  30. Post #30
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    Really? You call 14 year olds kids? Well, I guess each person has their own opinion.
    Gee, maybe because 14 year olds ARE kids?
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  31. Post #31

    October 2011
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    Oh yeah, and one final message: I wont stop making videos. They might be bad, but they've gotten better. By the time I am older, they wont be as bad, and there wont be retards calling 14 year olds kids.
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    n1 cares
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    February 2011
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    -snip-
    You're shit.

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    -
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  35. Post #35
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    June 2009
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    idk how he got away with that here you practically get nuked from orbit

  36. Post #36
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    March 2008
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    Misleading title.
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  37. Post #37
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    but when I make a video you guys get mad at me because its not
    as good as freddiew or corridordigital.
    No, "us guys" give you constructive criticism and you refuse to take it because you are too butthurt in denial believing your videos don't need improvement. Good riddance.
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  38. Post #38
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    December 2009
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    I'm going to take you seriously for a second and i'll give you some proper advice. Most people get After effects or whatever and say "He let's make guns and explosions and shit" and without any prior knowledge they just google some tutorials and they make a video of equal quality as yours (not that great)

    If you want to really pursue video editing learn some compositing techniques then apply them to real scenarios, don't jump straight in.

    Also continuing making videos like this won't help. You need to focus, say to yourself "Hey I want to try some dynamic lighting in a live action scene, with bump mapped surfaces" or something and go do it, don't just go out to make shit blow up.

  39. Post #39
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    June 2011
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    Really? You call 14 year olds kids? Well, I guess each person has their own opinion.
    honestly you could be 20 and id think you were a kid because you act like a 12 year old

    Edited:

    Trust me, ive been meaning to. I dont like sites full of assholes. Some of you people are nice, like
    Mr. Badcop (I think thats his name) but when I make a video you guys get mad at me because its not
    as good as freddiew or corridordigital. Well facepunch, goodbye.
    you're posting here asking for criticism on your work, then complain because you don't like what we have to say.
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  40. Post #40
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    May 2011
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    Trust me, ive been meaning to. I dont like sites full of assholes. Some of you people are nice, like
    Mr. Badcop (I think thats his name) but when I make a video you guys get mad at me because its not
    as good as freddiew or corridordigital. Well facepunch, goodbye.
    You forgot my name :(
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