[chaz13]

Yo,

Finally glad I've got this pretty much finished.. didn't really turn out how I was hoping so I've just used it as practice for production techniques more than anything really. Comments and crits would be awesome!

Listen to Soundcloud recording

http://soundcloud.com/chaz13/making-youu-starry-eyed

Merry christmas!

*and at least it's better than the Jakwob remix*

[killa101]

Wow, the intro from 0:15 on is actually amazing. Oh shit that drop.

I really enjoyed this, maybe I've lost my liking for 'wobble' dubstep. I think this could use some high synth plucks or piano keys to bring out a little more atmosphere and excitement. Otherwise, spot on!

[chaz13]

killa101 posted:

Wow, the intro from 0:15 on is actually amazing. Oh shit that drop.

I really enjoyed this, maybe I've lost my liking for 'wobble' dubstep. I think this could use some high synth plucks or piano keys to bring out a little more atmosphere and excitement. Otherwise, spot on!

Thanks, you've motivated me to polish this off a lot more now.. Listening to it after the sound cloud rape the mix is a bit off so I'll fix that and I agree about the high plucks, I'll look into that.

And agreed, I don't really like much dubstep in general so I was going for the big-reese, chilled kind of vibe. My plans got lost somewhere along the way but it's still not the steretypical dodgy wobbles, and I do love the "big" reese I have in the intro so it's all graavy I guess- we still need to do a collab, even if it's not for the album. It can more chill then, too

[killa101]

Yeah, we'll collab for the hell of it, then we won't have any deadlines to worry about

[Flem]

needs more agressiveness.

[chaz13]

Flem posted:

needs more agressiveness.

How come? If anything it's almost more aggressive than I was really going for.

[chaz13]

Updated version. Taken into account everything killa said because he's a genius, changed the synths up a little, added a string harmony and improved the mastering. Thoughts?

Listen to Soundcloud recording

http://soundcloud.com/chaz13/making-youu-starry-eyed

[Dead Madman]

Wow, really nice, it sounds perfect in my opinion, can't really say anything to improve upon, it's pretty good.

[JackDestiny]

The quality of the vocals are pretty low and this ruins the song for me a bit. But it's cool nonetheless

[Bumbanut]

Maybe it's just me, but I feel like it needs a tiny bit more bass.
Quickedit: Otherwise it's amazing.

[Darkslicer]

I really like the non heavyness of this, it's really smooth and I listened to it all while browsing around! Good job!

[Dead Madman]

Downloaded and put on iPod, I can't get enough of this.

[chaz13]

Thank you for all the suggestions and feedback.

JackDestiny posted:

The quality of the vocals are pretty low and this ruins the song for me a bit. But it's cool nonetheless

I agree with you here.. The vocals are very much effect raped but the original acapella I found was awful quality- I ended up extracting my own but I still couldn't get it any better, and there's no studio versions anywhere.