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    Hi guys, I'm an unprofessional dj, and would be very happy if you would listen to my songs and say what's good / wrong and etc. I would really appreciate it.



    Youtube channel : http://www.youtube.com/user/Overpain10
    Also my soundcloud http://soundcloud.com/overpain

    Sorry if this isn't the right topic or it is against the rules.

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    June 2011
    202 Posts
    too much microphone effect / disortion in the first one (<- im by no means a musician so that's the best term I've got for it!)
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    I once watched a girl get eaten by a horse and it was bad
    Dead Madman's Avatar
    December 2008
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    What program did you use for this?
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    The Union Jack would look a shit ton better with a Hammer and Sickle in the middle of it
    Bobie's Avatar
    November 2007
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    i dunno what happens at the end of the first one, you need to work on beatmatching definitely
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    August 2008
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    In my opinion you need to work on timing and mixing as well (mixing in the second one is rough). I don't really do remixes I just make original tunes but in my opinion these are a little dull.
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    Rome's Avatar
    August 2011
    221 Posts
    You also need to work on song selection. It's important for transitions to sound nice somewhat naturally even with just a simple fade.

    Edited:

    Wow you switch songs so damn quickly that it would be near impossible to dance to this. Not to mention you tend to cut out right after a drop.

    Let me ask you something; have you ever been in a club?
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    You also need to work on song selection. It's important for transitions to sound nice somewhat naturally even with just a simple fade.

    Edited:

    Wow you switch songs so damn quickly that it would be near impossible to dance to this. Not to mention you tend to cut out right after a drop.

    Let me ask you something; have you ever been in a club?
    Not in the good ones.


    Also,Thanks for opinions. I will try to work more on timing, but i dunno whats wrong with the songs?

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    August 2005
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    You definitely have to learn to beatmatch :) Learn that first, then it will all make sense. After you learn to beatmatch you should also be able to recognize 8, 16 and 32 bar structures without counting the beats. It will come naturally.
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