In all seriousness I kinda like the beats. Not a huge fan of the rapping nor his voice.
nice nice....anymore opinions?
It's mixed well and it's not bad. But it sounds like every other clubby youtube rap song ever. The same drums. The same bass. The same sound effects. The same decent flow with words that don't seem to have any connection to each other. You've gotta set yourself apart if you want to get noticed.
The whole plug-my-videos-everywhere-i-can approach isn't doing you any favors either.
Half decent production though.
Hate to give a little philosophical lesson, but the way to be known these days is to be different. Nobody wants the same stuff they hear over the radio 24/7. The way I see it there are two types of people when it comes to listening to the music; those who rely on the radio to give them music they'll enjoy, and those who don't. The ones who do are too stubborn to give music like this a chance, and the ones who don't are out there listening to more experimental, barrier breaking stuff.
Moreso, stuff like this is what we've all heard before, someone rapping over a beat. People that push boundaries tend to live immortally in terms of music, maybe Michael Jackson released a tonne of hits, but Dark Side of the Moon is still hailed as one of the greatest albums of all time.
Point being, do something original. I like the beats and all, but they get too repetitive too quickly.
Is this different enough?
Not really. The production is a lot better but your rhymes are still weak.
Your first two bars were
"Diamond in the rough
i'm a stud"
come on dude
yeap needs improvement, still there's nothing interesting happening lyrically and no style.
Hip Hop usually gives me a thrill in the way it moves. This is so linear, even the chorus isn't enticing enough.
It's pretty clear you work more on the smoothness of the instrumentals though. Can I ask if you'd rather be an instrumental hip hop artist than a rapper?
Ok guys everyone I showed said they liked this song. I did this a while back and I had a different style back then so if you guys don't like this then Idk what you guys like
Wait I finally got it, I know what kind of music you guise like
some of the rhymes are kinda neat but still there's no flow. last track has the same problems as the rest tbh
well of course your friends will like your music. they won't exactly be heartless.
Um I have no friends the ones that liked the video are random internet peoples on YouTube
AK'z, we should chizzat more. Got aim or msn?
yeah it's a cool album, I knew you liked downtempo and modern classical stuff so what the heck.