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    Number-41's Avatar
    August 2005
    4,290 Posts

  2. Post #2
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    MrWhite's Avatar
    March 2010
    3,534 Posts
    The instrument feels too 'banjo-y'. I think if a more mellow string were used (bass, maybe simple acoustic guitar) it might sound a bit less harsh.

    I'm no music expert or anything, so the above may not make all too much sense, but I do have a sense of musical quality. I like the chords, but I don't like the instrument.

  3. Post #3
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    Timma2's Avatar
    September 2005
    143 Posts
    Dynamics are very important, you need a more varied attack for that instrument.

  4. Post #4
    MaroonMak's Avatar
    October 2011
    467 Posts
    It all sounds a bit random, even for improvisation.Building tension and releasing said tension is extremely important. Also I think you should chose a different instrument. something with a less distorted sound would be better, like an acoustic guitar.
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