1. Post #1
    garryzmod's Avatar
    July 2009
    56 Posts
    a very early version of a resterant for my RP map.

    http://www.garrysmod.org/downloads/?a=view&id=72190

    the baracades on the door will be gone later. i just got bored. :)

    tell me what you think, what i should add.

    i dont like pics.

  2. Post #2
    Ghast's Avatar
    February 2009
    280 Posts
    You spelled restaurant wrong.

  3. Post #3
    garryzmod's Avatar
    July 2009
    56 Posts
    You spelled restaurant wrong.
    W/E


    its 2:30 AM

  4. Post #4
    Gold Member
    robmaister12's Avatar
    January 2008
    4,969 Posts
    pictures?

    upload to imageshack, place direct link between [img][/img] tags.

    no one will actually download or use unless they have some pictures to look at first.

  5. Post #5
    garryzmod's Avatar
    July 2009
    56 Posts
    pictures?

    upload to imageshack, place direct link between [img][/img] tags.

    no one will actually download or use unless they have some pictures to look at first.
    k, hold on.

  6. Post #6
    Probably the most arrogant mapper in the World
    Jukka K's Avatar
    June 2007
    1,730 Posts
    k, hold on.
    Don't upload to Imageshack because it sucks. Use another upload service like Photobucket for it.

  7. Post #7
    Pilotclan9404's Avatar
    January 2009
    813 Posts
    Still waiting for those Pics....

  8. Post #8
    garryzmod's Avatar
    July 2009
    56 Posts
    Still waiting for those Pics....
    yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa,no

  9. Post #9
    Gold Member
    nivek's Avatar
    June 2009
    3,508 Posts
    You fail at thread.
    l2 get pictures.

  10. Post #10
    garryzmod's Avatar
    July 2009
    56 Posts
    You fail at thread.
    l2 get pictures.
    by no, i mean your not going to be waiting anymore.

  11. Post #11
    Gold Member
    HiddenMyst's Avatar
    June 2006
    6,634 Posts
    by no, i mean your not going to be waiting anymore.
    Umm, we're still waiting.

  12. Post #12
    Meknes's Avatar
    April 2009
    545 Posts
    I do not think anyone in the right mind is going try a map made by a author who cant even spell restaurant, even when a spell checker is present.

  13. Post #13
    Pavel is best comrade
    Hypervelocity's Avatar
    January 2007
    416 Posts
    SOMEONE open it in hammer and get pic what it looks like all i smell is a god damn gayass blocky shit or that he stole it from someone else

  14. Post #14
    Joey1's Avatar
    April 2009
    1,122 Posts
    i downloaded it, open it, look at it...then i shot myself into head, then close it and then deleted it

    Sorry for bad english.... but if you will see it... you will say same thing

  15. Post #15
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    selby3962's Avatar
    February 2009
    2,198 Posts
    Okay, I'm going to be brutally honest about this and expect no "U R FAG" response, just to make that clear.

    1. Fullbright
    2. No skybox
    3. Misaligned textures
    4. You did your doors wrong and didn't add any door-frames.
    5. Used brushes where models would work much better
    6. Massive leak, might take you a good hour to find it. (psst, it's got no ceiling)
    7. Didn't func_detail any of the random brushes that float around the place.
    8. No props
    9. No detail at all
    10. The same orange devmeasure texture used everywhere.

    I don't recommend continuing with this or your RP map, start small, practice, practice and more practice makes perfect.
    I don't release many maps but I don't feel compelled to release every single thing I make, I suggest you do the same. If you see an image of a building or see something outside that inspires you try and map it and be honest with yourself, if you don't feel compelled to finish it, scrap it.

    EDIT: Screenshot for the rest of you.

  16. Post #16
    garryzmod's Avatar
    July 2009
    56 Posts
    ok now, got some new screen dev shots. sry for the wait, my internet went out. ill have them up in a sec.

    Edited:

    Okay, I'm going to be brutally honest about this and expect no "U R FAG" response, just to make that clear.

    1. Fullbright
    2. No skybox
    3. Misaligned textures
    4. You did your doors wrong and didn't add any door-frames.
    5. Used brushes where models would work much better
    6. Massive leak, might take you a good hour to find it. (psst, it's got no ceiling)
    7. Didn't func_detail any of the random brushes that float around the place.
    8. No props
    9. No detail at all
    10. The same orange devmeasure texture used everywhere.

    I don't recommend continuing with this or your RP map, start small, practice, practice and more practice makes perfect.
    I don't release many maps but I don't feel compelled to release every single thing I make, I suggest you do the same. If you see an image of a building or see something outside that inspires you try and map it and be honest with yourself, if you don't feel compelled to finish it, scrap it.

    EDIT: Screenshot for the rest of you.
    and you, im not done with it. fuck. do you honestly think i was going to release it in that state?

    Edited:



    and the rest http://www.flickr.com/photos/40331902@N08/?saved=1

    Edited:

    ok now, got some new screen dev shots. sry for the wait, my internet went out. ill have them up in a sec.

    Edited:



    and you, im not done with it. fuck. do you honestly think i was going to release it in that state?

    Edited:



    and the rest http://www.flickr.com/photos/40331902@N08/?saved=1

    and now, im going to add a working oven, a sink full of water and dishes, more shelving, and overall add ALOT more detail.

  17. Post #17
    Gold Member
    Zally13's Avatar
    July 2008
    4,976 Posts
    and you, im not done with it. fuck. do you honestly think i was going to release it in that state?
    Everything he said was true and to a certain extent nice. If you're going to release a screenshot, expect the truth.

  18. Post #18
    garryzmod's Avatar
    July 2009
    56 Posts
    Everything he said was true and to a certain extent nice. If you're going to release a screenshot, expect the truth.
    1. Fullbright, duh, im going to add lighting.
    2. No skybox, its indoor...
    3. Misaligned textures, there are not even any textures in there yet
    4. You did your doors wrong and didn't add any door-frames. again, not done.
    5. Used brushes where models would work much better. i like the block tool.
    6. Massive leak, might take you a good hour to find it. (psst, it's got no ceiling), no shit sherlock.
    7. Didn't func_detail any of the random brushes that float around the place. will do later.
    8. No props. not done
    9. No detail at all. still not done.
    10. The same orange devmeasure texture used everywhere. better than a brick texture.

  19. Post #19
    Gold Member
    Zally13's Avatar
    July 2008
    4,976 Posts
    1. Fullbright, duh, im going to add lighting.
    2. No skybox, its indoor...
    3. Misaligned textures, there are not even any textures in there yet
    4. You did your doors wrong and didn't add any door-frames. again,
    5. Used brushes where models would work much better. i like the block tool.
    6. Massive leak, might take you a good hour to find it. (psst, it's got no ceiling), no shit sherlock.
    7. Didn't func_detail any of the random brushes that float around the place. will do later.
    8. No props. not done
    9. No detail at all. still not done.
    10. The same orange devmeasure texture used everywhere. better than a brick texture.
    Seems like excuses, excuses, excuses. Still, the dev textures can be misaligned. As in the grid parts dont match up. Just saying.

  20. Post #20
    garryzmod's Avatar
    July 2009
    56 Posts
    Seems like excuses, excuses, excuses. Still, the dev textures can be misaligned. As in the grid parts dont match up. Just saying.
    dev textures arent going to stay.

    Edited:

    remember, this is still in the beta stage

  21. Post #21
    Joey1's Avatar
    April 2009
    1,122 Posts
    I stil think you can put it into WIP theard, because its not too much for own theard

  22. Post #22
    garryzmod's Avatar
    July 2009
    56 Posts
    I stil think you can put it into WIP theard, because its not too much for own theard
    right. ok. yea ill do that.

  23. Post #23
    BillyTalentx's Avatar
    December 2007
    462 Posts
    I think you should re-assess your life.

  24. Post #24
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    HiddenMyst's Avatar
    June 2006
    6,634 Posts
    I think you guys are being a little over-critical on this one. Sure, it does need lots of work before it is done, but he did put it in a WIP thread, so give him actual help with your criticism.

  25. Post #25
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    selby3962's Avatar
    February 2009
    2,198 Posts
    Well thanks, I'm glad you appreciate the time I took to assess your WIP. If you release something to the public and ask us to tell you what we think then damn sure we're going to do it and calling it a "WIP" doesn't make it exempt from criticism.

  26. Post #26
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    Ninja101's Avatar
    December 2008
    740 Posts
    Nice post by Selbs, Read it and change your "WIP" or just delete it ;)