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    A remake of an older piece of mine. http://truewolf.deviantart.com/art/B...urai-100604085 (done in oct 08) ..
    I liked the concept of that piece, but bleh. I felt the needed a remake.



    so here it is.. with a video..


    It should be processing, so give it a minute :3:

    and here's the dev link if anyone's interested - http://truewolf.deviantart.com/art/B...rior-131925085

    Edit:
    By the way guys, would you like to see a live stream of me painting? or are these recordings fine as it is. Since now Fp has this facination of live recordings all of a sudden lol :P

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    Amazing.

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    thanks :)

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    I would never have the patience to learn to paint like this. nice work.

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    thx man. :D

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    That is pure awesomeness! I wish i'd learn to paint like that!

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    thanks :).. you could if u actually tried/practiced.

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    Quick critic: perspective wrong, head small

    as for the rest : awesome ! :buddy:

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    Good thing you didn't go trough with those cuts on his torso.

    Also, what the hell is this thing, and why do I not have one?

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    Good thing you didn't go trough with those cuts on his torso.

    Also, what the hell is this thing, and why do I not have one?
    Oh that? Why thats the man muscle good sir!

    You don't have a man muscle? oh well thats serious! Quick! go see a doctor at once!

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    God damn he's bad ass!
    Freaking love it, great job

    Edited:

    Oh, and I would watch a stream when you paint.

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    Oh that? Why thats the man muscle good sir!

    You don't have a man muscle? oh well thats serious! Quick! go see a doctor at once!
    It's an extra muscle at that, or at least a poorly placed one. The tricep should be up where he put the brachialis, and the brachialis should run down the middle of the arm.

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    I can't tell if he is sagging or if his forearms are too short. :)
    Great drawing, did you use colorize? If so, hit me up on steam and I can show you how to get some great renderings with colorize and some other layer options.

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    thats insane :|
    i love it.

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    His left breast looks... Not very good, especially not the nipple placement. The muscle bend on his left arm (the muscle in the middle) looks really unnatural. He has an incredibly thick and long vein going down his neck. His neck seems a bit, well thick, removing his head shape, they kind of merge into eachother, oh wait, it's just that his head is 2D whilst the body is 3D.

    But otherwise it's quite awesome, but I liked it better as B/W in the video before you added the strong overlay shadows and stuff.

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    Thanks everyone for the comments and critiques :D

    also:
    I can't tell if he is sagging or if his forearms are too short. :)
    Great drawing, did you use colorize? If so, hit me up on steam and I can show you how to get some great renderings with colorize and some other layer options.
    Can't tell if what's sagging? :P
    also, i don't know what colorize is, i might have used it, but i don't know what it's called

    His left breast looks... Not very good, especially not the nipple placement. The muscle bend on his left arm (the muscle in the middle) looks really unnatural. He has an incredibly thick and long vein going down his neck. His neck seems a bit, well thick, removing his head shape, they kind of merge into eachother, oh wait, it's just that his head is 2D whilst the body is 3D.

    But otherwise it's quite awesome, but I liked it better as B/W in the video before you added the strong overlay shadows and stuff.
    dgg, half of what you said i don't understand lol.. first off that's not a vein, every neck has two of those on either side of their neck, and it shows depending on how built you are. it becomes really visible when your head is turned to the side. And what do you mean the head is 2d and the body is 3d, you mean one is turned to the side in profile view while the other is at a 3/4 angle?

    It's an extra muscle at that, or at least a poorly placed one. The tricep should be up where he put the brachialis, and the brachialis should run down the middle of the arm.
    Well, That muscle there is actually there. Just not as profound (popping out) as i made it to be. right under the tricep.

    i agree with you on the brachialis though.

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    dgg, half of what you said i don't understand lol.. first off that's not a vein, every neck has two of those on either side of their neck, and it shows depending on how built you are. it becomes really visible when your head is turned to the side. And what do you mean the head is 2d and the body is 3d, you mean one is turned to the side in profile view while the other is at a 3/4 angle?
    Well yeah I dunno what those neck things are called, so I call it a vein. Well yeah, it looks way too THICK, it's really huge.

    And what I mean is because you've set the face in a complete 2D view with the body in a 3/4 angle it seems off, really off, as if he turns his head way to the right, but the main problem is the neck and shoulder. Your shoulder is connected with the neck way too much and it seems to go straight to the head.

    I'll illustrate it.

    into

    This illustration is overdone, but you catch my point.

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    Well that vein thing looks about right to me, i think it's even a bit too thin.. but needs to be blended into the neck better, it looks like its not attached to it, which might be throwing it off.



    But i do agree with you and see the back part of the neck being waay too big. thanks for that :d

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    it becomes really visible when your head is turned to the side.
    It does, but it doesn't go that far up(Well, actually it does. But it's not that visible the further you go up), I mistook it for a vein too.

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    It does, but it doesn't go that far up(Well, actually it does. But it's not that visible the further you go up), I mistook it for a vein too.
    gotchya.. thanks ^^

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    Well, That muscle there is actually there. Just not as profound (popping out) as i made it to be. right under the tricep.
    It's not a muscle. It's a tendon attaching the tricep to the ulna.

    Look at the pic you posted. That 'muscle' is hardly large at all compared to the rest of the tricep, and I guarantee you will never see someone's tendons that large unless they've got some serious, serious problems.

    Anyway, I apologize if I seem like I'm ranting. I've become something of an anatomy nut, and stuff like that bugs me.

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    it's all good, anyways, muscle or not, there is something there :P and i just drew it a bit more bulged out, which i don't believe is as big of a deal as you're making it lol.. but anyways. i'll tone that thing down next time i draw it. :)

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    I have also noticed that the left breast not only looks weird but isn't connected all the way and is blurry. But eh.

    Well that vein thing looks about right to me, i think it's even a bit too thin.. but needs to be blended into the neck better, it looks like its not attached to it, which might be throwing it off.



    But i do agree with you and see the back part of the neck being waay too big. thanks for that :d
    Notice how you can't SEE it go all the way up in the grey one, and there he really makes it pop out.

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    it's all good, anyways, muscle or not, there is something there :P and i just drew it a bit more bulged out, which i don't believe is as big of a deal as you're making it lol.. but anyways. i'll tone that thing down next time i draw it. :)
    You should be ashamed !

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    yeah i noticed with how the higher it goes, the less you can see it, i didn't add that subtlety which makes it pop out too much making it seem big even when it's too thin..

    also which breast, our breast or his breast.

    Edited:

    You should be ashamed !
    :crying:

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    dgg
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    also which breast, our breast or his breast.
    My breast. I was wondering if you knew a way to sharpen it and connect it all the way. And please, no filterrape shit on it.

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    My breast.
    wait so the one on the left?

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    wait so the one on the left?
    Yeah, my left breast. Can'tcha read?

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    to sharpen it , all that needs to be done is to paint over it with a sharper brush :>

    Edited:

    Yeah, my left breast. Can'tcha read?
    obviously not. I just have this guy here sitting next to me, read and write for me on facepunch.

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    to sharpen it , all that needs to be done is to paint over it with a sharper brush :>
    But I don't have any painting equipment here at home. I only have pencils and pens.

    obviously not. I just have this guy here sitting next to me, read and write for me on facepunch.
    What a dick, is it the guy in your avatar?

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    take picture, digital paint on it, print out, paste with silicon glue.

    Edited:

    But I don't have any painting equipment here at home. I only have pencils and pens.



    What a dick, is it the guy in your avatar?
    Yeha, now you know why you see a lot of typos in my posts.

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    take picture, digital paint on it, print out, paste with silicon glue.

    Yeha, now you know why you see a lot of typos in my posts.
    Oh my, you're a bloody genius.

    Yeah, it all makes sense now. He should be hit hard in the face (be careful of the eyes, you need them after all).


    Well, I'm off to bed, sorry, can't keep this going. Probably a good thing.

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    Oh my, you're a bloody genius.

    Yeah, it all makes sense now. He should be hit hard in the face (be careful of the eyes, you need them after all).

    Yeha, i know i know..

    and i constantly do that, i hit him hard :)

    Edited:

    Well, I'm off to bed, sorry, can't keep this going. Probably a good thing.
    trueThaT