1. Post #1
    ExtremeSurvivor's Avatar
    August 2009
    9 Posts
    Hello, this is my Second map I Made. Hope you like it.

    Name: gm_da_big_room
    Discription:This map I made has a table,chair,trashcan that has a lid that opens and closes, a mouse hole in the wall, a secrect hideout.
    Requirements: Garrysmod
    Size when unziped:1.31 MB
    Author of Map: ExtremeSurvivor




    Please take a look at it and hope you like what you see and download it.



    Leave your comments about the map and tell me if you liked it or not and why.
    Thank you

  2. Post #2
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    hexpunK's Avatar
    August 2008
    15,315 Posts
    It looks a bit simple, and bit blocky and the textures repeat a lot. But at least it's not fullbright.

    You could add details to the legs ot the table, add more random clutter on the floor, put some shelves or something on the walls. And is the light just a floating spot? Or does it have a source? If not, add one.

  3. Post #3
    ExtremeSurvivor's Avatar
    August 2009
    9 Posts
    thanks for the comment. And i would like to say that i am getting better at mapping cause if you look at my first one it isnt as good as this one. oh and i like the shelves idea. Im working on the lighting, trying to make it look more realistic.

  4. Post #4
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    hexpunK's Avatar
    August 2008
    15,315 Posts
    Awesome, I hope you can find something fitting.

  5. Post #5
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    esrande's Avatar
    August 2006
    759 Posts
    It's like a Rats map
    But worse
    It desperately needs details, the textures look bland and the lighting is dull.
    Also, i don't really think it looks like a normal room.

  6. Post #6
    ExtremeSurvivor's Avatar
    August 2009
    9 Posts
    esrande, well thanks for the comment even though it was a negative. But im making a MUCH better map and the things you told me, i will work on. i hope for you to try this next one and tell me what you think.

  7. Post #7
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    Downsider's Avatar
    July 2007
    1,999 Posts
    no pics no clicks

  8. Post #8
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    fordlover89's Avatar
    January 2008
    525 Posts
    Click on the link and you'll get your pics.

  9. Post #9
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    Downsider's Avatar
    July 2007
    1,999 Posts
    o thx

    Edited:

    sux

  10. Post #10
    MirageKnight's Avatar
    July 2009
    775 Posts
    -Blocky
    -Crappy Texturing
    -Pretty Bland Looking

  11. Post #11
    ExtremeSurvivor's Avatar
    August 2009
    9 Posts
    By the way, Making new map much more detailed, not blocky, more relistic, and texturing is better.
    so when i finish it, take a look at it. oh and for this map did you think it was to small ? just wondering.

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    May 2009
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  14. Post #14
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    Bulaba0's Avatar
    July 2008
    1,995 Posts
    That new map is even worse! Some textures (Windows) don't even repeat properly, they just go off the edge. Don't even make a thread for it, it'll just get flamed.
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  15. Post #15
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    Skipcast's Avatar
    November 2008
    7,049 Posts
    just align the textures a bit better, will look much better

  16. Post #16
    ExtremeSurvivor's Avatar
    August 2009
    9 Posts
    ok, i would have fixed it if i saw the mistakes.

  17. Post #17
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    Bulaba0's Avatar
    July 2008
    1,995 Posts
    Seriously slow the fuck down with your maps. You're rushing them way too much. You have alot of good ideas, but they're all riddled with mistakes and easily catch-able mistakes.