1. Post #1
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    cornbread's Avatar
    November 2008
    2,188 Posts
    Hopefully these are better than the other one I posted earlier today. A Russian soldier is fatally wounded while his two comrades clear the way for his extraction.

    First angle:

    Second angle:


    Ok, I know im not very good at scene making but please, just bear with me and give C&C. Thanks.
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  2. Post #2
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    Santz's Avatar
    June 2009
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    Looks fine, the posing is getting better, but the soldier on the back got his legs posed wrong.

  3. Post #3
    Dennab
    June 2008
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    Don't use the DoF in GMod. Try some of your own editing, not the in game. The posing could use a lot of work, I find using a reference picture way easier. I mean it's decent, but nothing to rave about.
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  4. Post #4
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    November 2008
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    That poor fellow got some blood on his extra magazines.
    Logical thinking helps when trying to make a realistic picture.

  5. Post #5
    zz8140's Avatar
    November 2007
    247 Posts
    lol Very dynamic Pic

  6. Post #6
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    June 2009
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    Don't use the DoF in GMod. Try some of your own editing, not the in game. The posing could use a lot of work, I find using a reference picture way easier. I mean it's decent, but nothing to rave about.
    No, no, no. Use the ingame blur, because if you use the blur on a editing program you only create more (useless)work in isolation and graduating the blur, while if you do it ingame its easier to apply and you can achieve the same or better result.
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  7. Post #7
    tlsaudrl2548's Avatar
    September 2009
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    looks like that guy who grabbing dieing man is like about to kill him.
    after all, he is not grabbing him he is stabing him

  8. Post #8
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    May 2009
    3,220 Posts
    If he is fatally wounded. What would be the point of extracting a corpse?

  9. Post #9
    declan's Avatar
    January 2006
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    If he is fatally wounded. What would be the point of extracting a corpse?
    To bury him obviously

  10. Post #10
    CabooseRvB's Avatar
    September 2009
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    Reminds me of my own first pose.

  11. Post #11
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    May 2005
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    Don't use the DoF in GMod. Try some of your own editing, not the in game. The posing could use a lot of work, I find using a reference picture way easier. I mean it's decent, but nothing to rave about.
    Why the hell wouldn't you use the super DoF in GMod? Recreating the same kind of effect in photoshop would be very difficult and it probably still wouldn't look as good as the one done in gmod. There's nothing wrong with gmod's super DoF.
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  12. Post #12
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    November 2008
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    Well I apprecieate all of your comments, I'll try to work on my faults.