1. Post #2721
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    chaz13's Avatar
    August 2005
    2,137 Posts
    That's pretty cool man! Interesting style, I like the change from drumstep to DnB and the piano. The bass does drive the song but I think it needs some modulation. And the short pads that come in at 1.10 or so are a bit loud/too airy, in my opinion.

    Update on my DnB song. Fixed the mix and added more, chose to go with whats becoming my classic style of bass too. I'm loving the second drop, getting close to the finishing stages now I think.

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  2. Post #2722
    Dennab
    March 2010
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    Trying to go for a sort of Moombahton style, still working on everything, nothing is final by any means:

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  4. Post #2724
    CLungcancer's Avatar
    August 2008
    1,505 Posts
    Update on my DnB song. Fixed the mix and added more, chose to go with whats becoming my classic style of bass too. I'm loving the second drop, getting close to the finishing stages now I think.

    I love that bass! Either it's the schools headphone or it's lacking a good sub-bass, tho. The second drop is pretty sick too!

    Edited:

    Trying to go for a sort of Moombahton style, still working on everything, nothing is final by any means:

    I don't think there is a snare in there? Or I can't just hear it. Sidechain the kick to the synth a little, I can barely hear it. The synth little too harsh imo

    Edited:

    The snare sounds horrible, it's way too loud and harsh. The whole mix is a little weird, you should look into it.
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  5. Post #2725
    JackDestiny's Avatar
    May 2007
    928 Posts
    I think this is my best one so far. I'm really excited to finish this one!
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  6. Post #2726
    CapsAdmin's Avatar
    August 2005
    3,925 Posts
    i made this during a lan party and fixed it when i got back. it turned out kinda digitalism - blitz in a way now that i think about it, but i like that tune


    i made it with reason 6 sampling the melody bit in some old trance tune i made
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  7. Post #2727
    seanocaster's Avatar
    October 2010
    481 Posts
    I think this is my best one so far. I'm really excited to finish this one!
    try making your clap bigger. add some reverb maybe some quiet delay and double the track just to make it jump more. with this style beat you need the up to have some substance
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  8. Post #2728
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    fenwick's Avatar
    August 2005
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    i made this during a lan party and fixed it when i got back. it turned out kinda digitalism - blitz in a way now that i think about it, but i like that tune


    i made it with reason 6 sampling the melody bit in some old trance tune i made
    All of your music is so great.
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  9. Post #2729
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  10. Post #2730
    LufOo's Avatar
    September 2010
    718 Posts
    made hardcore song for dr pepper ad



    movie

    Edited:

    I did not make the second song
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  11. Post #2731
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    Pepin's Avatar
    April 2007
    6,864 Posts
    Some lyrics I came up with. Personally I quite like them.

    Can you remember
    The times I've been awake
    The times I've swam
    Out beyond the lake

    Do you remember the time
    I tried to fill the void
    With restless faces all annoyed

    Simpliciticies engraved on the face
    Lines and valleys interlaced
    With moments so fully embraced

    Do you remember
    Do you remember me?

    Can you recall the time
    We went to the store
    Products are their decor
    Building up our rapport

    Remember that time
    I made you look
    That thoughtless expresion was like a hook

    Do you remember the time I went away
    Promised I'd come back another day
    Tears and emotions won the day

    Then lines don't connect
    They aren't perfect nor wrecked
    As in the end in they redirect

    Do you remember
    Do you remember me?
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  13. Post #2733
    Dennab
    March 2010
    2,002 Posts
    First attempt at Electro House/"Complextro:"

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  14. Post #2734
    LufOo's Avatar
    September 2010
    718 Posts
    Im really liking the distorted sound of it, tho it sounds a bit too wet. Overall i think it needs more elements, try stretching the complextro parts a bit further and make them kick in more often. just my opinion of course ^__^
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  15. Post #2735
    Dennab
    March 2010
    2,002 Posts
    ...and generic progressive house




    Edited:
    New melody.
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  16. Post #2736
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    August 2007
    3,478 Posts
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedded&v=U2Ko9GqTkfg#!
    My friend recorded this last night, was there with him. Don't really contribute much other than telling him what's sloppy etc, but think it came out p good. Friend is first guy.
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  17. Post #2737
    Hobo4President's Avatar
    January 2009
    1,249 Posts
    I really like the drums, though I think I preferred the previous melody.




    Here's something new I'm working on. Still an early wip.

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  18. Post #2738
    Dennab
    March 2010
    2,002 Posts
    ...and more progressive house:

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  19. Post #2739
    IplayAspy's Avatar
    November 2008
    1,266 Posts

    Drumstep I'm working on.

    Lot of stuff to work on, could use some feedback on volume balance.
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  20. Post #2740
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    November 2008
    9,476 Posts
    i made this during a lan party and fixed it when i got back. it turned out kinda digitalism - blitz in a way now that i think about it, but i like that tune

    Listen to Soundcloud recording



    http://soundcloud.com/capsadmin/myship




    i made it with reason 6 sampling the melody bit in some old trance tune i made
    Already been stated, but everything you make sounds good
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  21. Post #2741
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    December 2008
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    -snip-
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  22. Post #2742
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    AxisofIdiocy's Avatar
    May 2006
    2,503 Posts
    whoops wrong thread

    hur
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  23. Post #2743
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    May 2006
    638 Posts

    I kind of wrote a classical type song, This is an older version, but it's fundamentally the same except for a few errors in instrument programming. I intend on having some friends come over on their own time and actually record the instruments since all the parts are pretty simple. C & C as always would be appreciated. Downloads available for anyone that wants to make me smile.
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  25. Post #2745
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    TimeBomb's Avatar
    May 2006
    638 Posts
    This sounds absolutely wonderful.
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  26. Post #2746
    vizard38's Avatar
    October 2009
    1,718 Posts
    Ignore the dissagree; accidental tap. Your song is fine, but some variation in the rhythmic structure would be nice.
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  27. Post #2747
    IplayAspy's Avatar
    November 2008
    1,266 Posts
    This sounds like it'd perfectly fit one of those older rpg games like Dark Cloud.
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  28. Post #2748
    CLungcancer's Avatar
    August 2008
    1,505 Posts
    Playing around with some samples, granulizer and effects.

    Edited:

    ...and more progressive house:

    It's really nice, but I think I have heard this somewhere else. I mean that there are many, many songs just like this.

    Edited:


    Drumstep I'm working on.

    Lot of stuff to work on, could use some feedback on volume balance.
    You might want to lower the bass volume a little and sidechain it to the kick. I think this got potential!
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  29. Post #2749
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    killa101's Avatar
    November 2005
    2,714 Posts
    after some crazy emotions this weekend i began writing this drumstep tune as soon as i woke up today
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  30. Post #2750
    Silly men accomplish magnificant tasks, the current ammount of womens rear exits that have surrounded my penis makes me confident I will accomplish, shit.
    Joppari's Avatar
    July 2008
    3,412 Posts
    I have a song i made i want to upload but it always says "There was an error while uploading. Waiting to retry..." after i've uploaded a bit :(

    Edited:

    well i managed to upload if on mediafire.
    http://www.mediafire.com/?eutbg7c5od0tmqq

    Bother to listen it it's my first thing ever i've shown to people on fl studio
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  31. Post #2751
    Rad McCool's Avatar
    August 2009
    3,883 Posts
    http://www.mediafire.com/?eutbg7c5od0tmqq

    Bother to listen it it's my first thing ever i've shown to people on fl studio
    Sounds nice. But is that all there is to it?
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  32. Post #2752
    Dennab
    March 2010
    2,002 Posts
    My first "real" song I suppose:




    Although I wouldn't consider it finished.
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  33. Post #2753
    Evoc's Avatar
    April 2008
    79 Posts

    A song I wrote over the past couple of days. I plan to extend the solo, change the outro, and re-track the guitars with a real amp as I used an amp sim in Reaper.
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  34. Post #2754
    CLungcancer's Avatar
    August 2008
    1,505 Posts
    Made this.. thing. I like it very much myself.

    Edited:

    My first "real" song I suppose:




    Although I wouldn't consider it finished.
    It sounds very good and got pretty good production value. It's not that unique tho, but I still like it. Pretty good job!

    Edited:


    A song I wrote over the past couple of days. I plan to extend the solo, change the outro, and re-track the guitars with a real amp as I used an amp sim in Reaper.
    It's not that interesting to listen by itself, but some vocals could do it wonders!
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  35. Post #2755
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    November 2009
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  36. Post #2756
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    bilbasio's Avatar
    May 2009
    785 Posts

    My first techno/trance song, it's only the intro but I still got it..

    The keys are E minor, C major, G major and B flat major.
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  37. Post #2757
    rokknroll4's Avatar
    March 2010
    1,158 Posts
    An ambient, electronic, post-rock-ish song I made using my extremely limited knowledge and experience with FL Studio, inspired by what I've been listening to lately (Lights Out Asia, M83) and as usual some post-rock (Sigur Ros and Hammock). I think it turned out well for only about a day of work and it being my first "completed" song, even though I still intend to add to it. The drums sound a little weird but that's how they were supposed to sound, really reverby and industrial sounding and I think it fits. Constructive criticism welcomed.
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  38. Post #2758
    seanocaster's Avatar
    October 2010
    481 Posts
    this is dope. can i borrow it and let my boy spit on it? ill post it when we get it done. all i would change is the shitty keys. use more space between the notes. all else is badass though. are you using a beatpad?
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  39. Post #2759
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    May 2006
    2,503 Posts

    second try making a song (ableton)


    what should i be learning from this to take into the next project?
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  40. Post #2760
    Atta|To|End's Avatar
    August 2009
    950 Posts

    Could this use some singing or is it fine?

    It's my E.P.
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