1. Post #4081

    December 2009
    108 Posts
    This is really nice, I love the feel that I'm getting from it. I can very much imagine an Aphex-style drum pattern fitting well into it. I'd love to see how this turns out.
    Thank you! I'm glad you like it!
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  2. Post #4082
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    October 2010
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    so i got inspired and worked on this little gem last night/this morning.

    CC please.
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  3. Post #4083

    December 2009
    108 Posts

    so i got inspired and worked on this little gem last night/this morning.

    CC please.
    The intro was good, the buildup with the gunshots (whatever they were) got me sucked in. However after the 36 second mark they got a little too intese, and just drowned out every other musical aspect.
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  4. Post #4084
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    October 2010
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    We were kind of joking around when we did the 36~ area, we were like "look we can just make this a disaster" but then I decided to make the rest of it serious. After my dentists appointment I'll clean that part up, make it sound pretty.

    Also yeah, all the sounds are gunshots except the Piano, Kick, Hat, and little techno thing during the phone call.

    Edited:

    Also I want people to be BRUTALLY honest. Because I've already had one person say "dude that blows" I want to make sure it's not just his personal taste conflicting, and that it actually blows.
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  5. Post #4085

    December 2009
    108 Posts
    Added some alternative melody that kicks in at bar three. I also uploaded an MP3 rather than recording it, because last time I wasn't statisfied with the quality. I think it sounds a bit better now. I'm currently trying to incorporate some Aphex Twin style drums, but progress is slow.
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  6. Post #4086
    vizard38's Avatar
    October 2009
    1,656 Posts
    I was feeling kinda pissed off yesterday so I was just messing around with the piano and recorded this; what do you guys think?


    This is by no means a very good song, its just something that happened.
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  7. Post #4087
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    October 2010
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  8. Post #4088
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    December 2006
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    I like what you've tried to do with the gunshots and love the intro/breaks but to be
    honest it kind of sounds really brutal and bit of a mess.

    Don't think anyone could listen to that and say they could stick it on and just listen to it in their spare time...
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  9. Post #4089
    The Union Jack would look a shit ton better with a Hammer and Sickle in the middle of it
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  10. Post #4090
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    October 2010
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    Experimenting, man! No one ever got anywhere by sticking to the norm.

    Edited:

    But really, my goal is to make that beat listen-able. Any suggestions?
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  11. Post #4091
    The Union Jack would look a shit ton better with a Hammer and Sickle in the middle of it
    Bobie's Avatar
    November 2007
    7,062 Posts
    a columbine 911 call and a fuckton of gun samples, its just tasteless. if you want to experiment, stop spamming samples and try putting effort into a sound thats never been achieved before.
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  13. Post #4093
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  14. Post #4094
    I once watched a girl get eaten by a horse and it was bad
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  15. Post #4095
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    May 2008
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  16. Post #4096
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    June 2011
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    I started this last night, kind of a more dance feeling than a happy hardcore.


    The intro sounds a little weird, but I can't pinpoint what is wrong with it
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  17. Post #4097
    The Union Jack would look a shit ton better with a Hammer and Sickle in the middle of it
    Bobie's Avatar
    November 2007
    7,062 Posts
    Default FL samples

    unsure if trolling

    Edited:

    Btw some electro house track I made

    Listen to Soundcloud recording



    http://soundcloud.com/morganhicks/snazzy-shoes

    i like this alot. that wum wum wum sound fits great after the drop, but then it seems a little lazy about 8 bars in. then the transition to the breakdown doesnt really make any sense. if you could make it sound just a little more unique and bouncy with the drumwork and flow together a bit more, youd have another great track. (work on the eqing too but i think i say that so much now its obvious)

    this is pretty good, you mixed it down pretty well but that snare is sticking out for me a little and sounds a bit annoying. it has a pretty low-fi sound, not sure if you were going for it or not but it sounds pretty cool and as a whole the track flows nicely. keep going and you should come out with some more exciting stuff soon!

    I started this last night, kind of a more dance feeling than a happy hardcore.




    The intro sounds a little weird, but I can't pinpoint what is wrong with it
    i dont think the intro sounds weird, other than the melody which doesnt really fit with the drop's melody, but it feels as if the track builds up to nowhere. dunno, work on the structure a bit more and it should be cool


    i made a song 2
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  18. Post #4098
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    August 2009
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    Added some alternative melody that kicks in at bar three. I also uploaded an MP3 rather than recording it, because last time I wasn't statisfied with the quality. I think it sounds a bit better now. I'm currently trying to incorporate some Aphex Twin style drums, but progress is slow.
    I like this a lot. Just sounds too well produced for my liking.

    Well... it's time for my leave. Have a good time posting songs and not listening or criticizing. I really tried to help (Everyone except the horrible house musicians. Sorry but it's not creative, it's just following formula :/ ) The only tracks you people seem to comment back on are trolls, which is clearly useless.
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  19. Post #4099

    December 2009
    108 Posts
    I like this a lot. Just sounds too well produced for my liking.
    I'll take that as a compliment.. but could you explain what you mean by too well produced? I'd like to know.
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    I'll take that as a compliment.. but could you explain what you mean by too well produced? I'd like to know.
    I think he's talking about the way it's mastered or whatever. When I turn it up it strains my ears because it's almost too crisp.


    Current piece I'm working on. I really like the intro I have on this one, I just need to clean up some of the repetitive parts at some points and clean up some synths. Any CC would be appreciated.
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  21. Post #4101

    December 2009
    108 Posts

    Added some drums, and other minor adjustments.

    Edited:


    Current piece I'm working on. I really like the intro I have on this one, I just need to clean up some of the repetitive parts at some points and clean up some synths. Any CC would be appreciated.
    Sounds preety good. Theres not much to pick on really, but I think your choice in chord changes makes for a dissonant sound rather than a pleasant (I forgot the musical term) one. I don't know, maybe that was what you were going for! It's good to try something diffirent.
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  22. Post #4102
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    February 2011
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    http://www23.zippyshare.com/v/72815812/file.html
    Cosmic love remix, should i continue making it?
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  23. Post #4103
    I once watched a girl get eaten by a horse and it was bad
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    December 2008
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    Hey guys, after hearing from the production community as a whole to try and produce in Ableton rather than FL, I tried something out:


    My workflow in FL really helped me out with using advanced shit in Ableton
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  24. Post #4104
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    May 2008
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    Cosmic love remix, should i continue making it?
    Never ask that from anyone else than yourself dude
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  25. Post #4105
    I once watched a girl get eaten by a horse and it was bad
    Dead Madman's Avatar
    December 2008
    5,427 Posts

    continued my first try on Ableton's project, I think it sounds fairly OK. I don't plan on making it into a full song, but it's just a test on Ableton and how I can produce on it
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  26. Post #4106
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    Dennab
    January 2006
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    sounds like i got punched in the face
    which is exactly what you want at a club after a couple.
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  27. Post #4107
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    January 2007
    1,125 Posts

    what y'all think?

    got some more here: http://soundcloud.com/danny-picard-lemieux

    oh no, not my real name! *not giving a shit*
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  28. Post #4108

    December 2009
    108 Posts
    I like it, nice chord progression.
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  29. Post #4109
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  30. Post #4110

    December 2009
    108 Posts

    Something that came together quite nicely while just experimenting. I was messing around with drums/percussion, and I'm really happy with how it turned out!
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  31. Post #4111
    I once watched a girl get eaten by a horse and it was bad
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    December 2008
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    the third version of my first Ableton song, working on mastering and making it longer (hot)
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  33. Post #4113
    I had a real awkward conversation with my dad asking if I could take a picture of him for free games
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    December 2009
    1,497 Posts

    Here's a song I've done. If anyone has constructive criticism I would gladly appreciate it.
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  34. Post #4114
    The Union Jack would look a shit ton better with a Hammer and Sickle in the middle of it
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    November 2007
    7,062 Posts
    this is wicked sick, reminds me of one of the more ambient mass effect themes. its great, could use some compression on some of the synths, bring out the low end a little more and tone down the reverb; but please dont turn it into a 'filthy' dubstep mix! youve got some real musical art in there and it would be a shame to turn it into a gimmick.
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    this is wicked sick, reminds me of one of the more ambient mass effect themes. its great, could use some compression on some of the synths, bring out the low end a little more and tone down the reverb; but please dont turn it into a 'filthy' dubstep mix! youve got some real musical art in there and it would be a shame to turn it into a gimmick.
    Thanks! Every feedback is important to me and i will change this in a song.
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  36. Post #4116
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    January 2012
    480 Posts
    Holy shit overpain! You have really improved! Get more experimental, but keep the melodies.


    I don't know if anyone will like it, I can't tell if it's awful, I need a peripheral opinion.
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  37. Post #4117

    December 2009
    108 Posts
    Holy shit overpain! You have really improved! Get more experimental, but keep the melodies.


    I don't know if anyone will like it, I can't tell if it's awful, I need a peripheral opinion.
    I like it. It's kind of like Acid without the glitchy drums.
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  38. Post #4118
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    January 2012
    480 Posts
    It's not finished, the melody won't repeat over and over when I finish
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  39. Post #4119
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    January 2010
    560 Posts
    It's not finished, the melody won't repeat over and over when I finish
    Does not sound right at all, everything to me is not in key or anything (it just sounds random to be honest). However, that intro without all that noise underneath it could be decent. Everything after the 1.20 mark is just noise to me. Maybe it will sound better once you get the melody done, still don't know if that is the genre, but everything else on your soundcloud sounds decent!


    Also, I don't think anyone saw my post on the last page. I'm working on a song with a friend, and I'm wanting some constructive feedback on it, do you guys mind if you have a listen?

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  40. Post #4120
    The Union Jack would look a shit ton better with a Hammer and Sickle in the middle of it
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    November 2007
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    criticism pls or i will eat ur cat



    atta 2 end rates dumb cause he gets angry over the internet lololool HOW BOUT THAT DRAMA
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